Aansoo My Own...............

[azeems]

Assalam O Aalaikum WR WB

[milestone]

Re: Aansoo My Own...............

Oonhun , aur ziyada bahter banao sicandar-e-azam:):zuban:

[azeems]

Re: Aansoo My Own...............

Oonhun , aur ziyada bahter banao sicandar-e-azam:):zuban:

Shukriya janab Kosish jari hai :) Azam nahi Azeem name hai

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Aansoo My Own...............

Achi nazam likhi hai aap ne Azeem aur design bhi acha kiya hai

[milestone]

Re: Aansoo My Own...............

Shukriya janab Kosish jari hai :) Azam nahi Azeem name hai

han han pata hai...suna hai jab sicandar koi sabaq yaad kar ta tha toh us ka ustaad yahi kahta tha ke , theek hai likin tum issey bhi behter yaad karsaktey ho.....toh

ok mein ne aap ki nazam mein kuch rad-o-badal kia hai . padh ke dekho kaisa lagta hai .

bichartey waqth us ki aankho mein
eik ajeeb si weerani thi .
pal bhar ke liye
jab us ne meri
ankhon mein dekha
tab khamushi kaheen ro rahi thi
meri aankhein bhigo rahi thi
mujhe laga us ka bhi man dola
hontaon pe us ke
eik sawal machla
jaise pooch rahi ho mujhe se
bol rahi hai ashkaon ki khamushi
kaheen is mein tumhari khushi toh nahi
phir us ne khud hi
apna sawal boojh liya
meri khamushi ko
meri jafa samajh liya
pal bhar mein
phir us ne bewafa kahdiya
socha na tha azeem
kabhi be basi ka naam
aansoo ho ga
aur
aansoun ka naam
bewafaa !!

[azeems]

Re: Aansoo My Own...............

Ab lag raha hia na kuch :phool:
Bohot Shukriya janab :rose

[milestone]

Re: Aansoo My Own...............

kahan kaisa lag raha hai ? yeh bataiyie aur is ko phir se design kijiye wo sahi nahi hai.

[*Samra*]

Re: Aansoo My Own...............

bohat achi likhi he...:) aur milestone ki tabdeeli bhi achi he :D

keep it up !

[azeems]

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khamoshi kahi ru rahi thi
meri aankhe bhigho rahi thi


and
phir us ne apna sawal boojh liya
meri khamoshi ko
meri jafa samjh liya
hmmm Chale karta ho janab :)

[azeems]

Re: Aansoo My Own...............

bohat achi likhi he...:) aur milestone ki tabdeeli bhi achi he :D

keep it up !

Shukriya Samra jee

[*Hala*]

Re: Aansoo My Own...............

w.salam
zabardast!! buht achi nazam lekhi app ni.... touching hai
or kaambe umdha hai... be happy

[azeems]

Re: Aansoo My Own...............

w.salam
zabardast!! buht achi nazam lekhi app ni.... touching hai
or kaambe umdha hai... be happy

Bohot Bohot Shukriya Hala jee :)

[Darwaish]

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nice work...
text strecthing ki hai shayed aap ney...text b thora unclear hia...keep working...

[Soulmate]

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nice work u done

[*Rida*]

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image buht achi hai ...aur frame bhi acha banany ki koshish ki hai lakin neat nahin hai... woh bhi ho jai ga.. koshish jari rakhaiye...:)