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Salam to All
Aik nazam pash-e-khidmat hay.Umeed hay Pasand aaye gi.
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Salam to All
Aik nazam pash-e-khidmat hay.Umeed hay Pasand aaye gi.
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Re: yeh saRkoN ki viraniaN
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Re: yeh saRkoN ki viraniaN
w.salam
frame acha banya hai ... ghazal ka intikhab be buht khoob hai
tora sy text or be behtar hoskta tha...u can't gain RESPECT by choice nor by requesting it... it is earned through your words & actions."
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Re: yeh saRkoN ki viraniaN
Nice worksigpic
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Re: yeh saRkoN ki viraniaN
poetry tu shayd aap ki khud ki hai ..Originally posted by Hussain76 View Post
Salam to All
Aik nazam pash-e-khidmat hay.Umeed hay Pasand aaye gi.
haqeeqat k nazdeek taren
nice ....
frame bhi sahi hai
magar jo sahpes ka aap nay usage kia hai
wo frame ko touch kar raha hai
thora sa size kum kar k deykhein ...
secondly ...colors ki hum aahaNgii ka thora sa khiyal kiya ja-ay tu
image aik dum cool ho jata hai
anyway day by day aap improve kar rahy hein ..
isi tarah hum sab seekhtay hein
inshaAllah aik din sab best ho ja-ay gaa :) ..
khush rahiyay ...share kartay rahiyay..:)Comment
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Re: yeh saRkoN ki viraniaN
Originally posted by *Hala* View PostDear Hala
Adab
Bhot bhot shokria atni bariki sy pahRny ka aur apny khobsorat lafzon se nawzny ka.behtri lany ki koshish karonga.Comment
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Re: yeh saRkoN ki viraniaN
Originally posted by WASI ANJUM View PostDear Wasi jee
Adab
Bhot shokriaComment
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Re: yeh saRkoN ki viraniaN
Originally posted by Gul View PostDear Gul jee
Adab
bhot shokria.app ne bilkol sahi kaha yeh poetry meri apni hay.
baki main achy se acha kam karny ki koshish karonga.Comment
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