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  • Goli Chal gai

    Salam sab dosoton ko mara
    Adab
    meri aik choti si kawish hai jo app dosoton ki nazar karta hoon umeed hai pasand aye gi.

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    Re: Goli Chal gai

    Nice try:thmbup: ..lekin text clear nhin aur kuch imla ki mistakes hain .....
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    • #3
      Re: Goli Chal gai

      Originally posted by Eshaa Chaudhry View Post
      Nice try:thmbup: ..lekin text clear nhin aur kuch imla ki mistakes hain .....
      Dear Eshaa jee
      Han bikol ap ne sahi kaha.main dobara try karta hoon.lakin masla yeh hai keh main ne yahan 5pictures milakar image banaya hai jis ki waja se problem araha hai.lakin main phir try karonga.kiun keh yeh nazam muje achi aur dard bhari lagi hai.

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      • #4
        Re: Goli Chal gai

        Bahot khoob janab lekin jaisay k eshaa ne kaha text clear nahi
        baqi sab sahi hai
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        • #5
          Re: Goli Chal gai

          nazam acha hai..
          u can't gain RESPECT by choice nor by requesting it... it is earned through your words & actions."

          :pr:

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          • #6
            Re: Goli Chal gai

            bohhat aalaa janabb
            "Can you imagine what I would do if I could do all I can? "

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            • #7
              Re: Goli Chal gai

              Originally posted by WASI ANJUM View Post
              Bahot khoob janab lekin jaisay k eshaa ne kaha text clear nahi
              baqi sab sahi hai
              Dear Wasi Jee
              Asslam O Alakum
              Muje bhot khoshi hoi ke app ne meri nazam Pasand ki.aur main main ne dobara apni nazam submit ki hai inshallah shikayat na ho gi.arz apny mofeed moshwaroon se nawazty rahy ga.

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              • #8
                Re: Goli Chal gai

                buht khoob..... koshish kartay rehain aahista aahistaa....buht achi designing karna seekh jaien gay.....:thmbup:
                pegham ka naam likha nazar nahin aaraha mujhay
                For New Designers
                وَ بَارِکْ لِيْ فِيْمَا أَعْطَيْتَ

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                • #9
                  Re: Goli Chal gai

                  Nashad Sahib nazam tu aap ki achi hai ..!

                  aik aur jagah b mein nay parhi ....

                  aap nay jo buhat se images mila-ay hein ..
                  onn ko sahi se aik Jagah karein tu achi khasi
                  place ban sakti hai Poem k text ko sahi dikhanay k liyay ...

                  Aap Merge option use kijay .....! Masking k sath :)

                  Khush rahiyay

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                  • #10
                    Re: Goli Chal gai

                    Originally posted by Gul View Post
                    Nashad Sahib nazam tu aap ki achi hai ..!

                    aik aur jagah b mein nay parhi ....

                    aap nay jo buhat se images mila-ay hein ..
                    onn ko sahi se aik Jagah karein tu achi khasi
                    place ban sakti hai Poem k text ko sahi dikhanay k liyay ...

                    Aap Merge option use kijay .....! Masking k sath :)

                    Khush rahiyay
                    Dear Gul jee
                    Adab
                    Main achi se achi nazam lakihny ki koshish karta hoon.mgr zaror kami beshi to ho gi.kiun ke main koi baRa shair nahi.aur nahi muje ab tak koi Ustad Mila hai.jis ki muje bhot kami lag rahi hai.Main app ki baton pe zaror Amal Karny ki koshish karonga.Hosla Afzai ka Shokria.

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                    • #11
                      Re: Goli Chal gai

                      Originally posted by *Hala* View Post
                      nazam acha hai..
                      Dear Hala jee
                      Adab
                      Bhot bhot shokria app ka.

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                      • #12
                        Re: Goli Chal gai

                        Originally posted by sarfraz_qamar View Post
                        bohhat aalaa janabb
                        Dear Sarfraz Qamar Sahib
                        Adab
                        Bhot shokria Hosla afzai ka

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                        • #13
                          Re: Goli Chal gai

                          text par thore tawaja or cool work ........



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                          • #14
                            Re: Goli Chal gai

                            Originally posted by Ali jee View Post
                            text par thore tawaja or cool work ........




                            Dear Ali jee
                            Ok Main koshish karonga

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                            • #15
                              Re: Goli Chal gai

                              Nashad sahib ...aap k kaam mein yani desiging mein
                              buhat ...behtari aai hai ..
                              MashaAllah
                              lagtaa hai aap seekh rahay hein !

                              Baqi Sha`iri aap ki tu achi hai ..!
                              Khush rahiyay

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