Aankhen bheeg jati hain,,,,,,,, (My Own)

[Mani16]

Asalaam O Alaikum:salam:
Meri apni Poetry hy umeed hy aapko pasand aayegi:rose

[ABUHAMZA]

Re: Aankhen bheeg jati hain,,,,,,,, (My Own)

Nice Words Mani Bhai

[khananiz]

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nice poetry mani.....
nice work...........

[farahan]

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Nice

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

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v nice ji


wasi shah ko copy kiya hai ap nay yahan :hehe:..lakin acha lhika hai..

[kemu]

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awesome

[refreshing_breeze]

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nice work and poetry :thmbup:

[Mani16]

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Thanks Malanga Bro,,,:rose

Nice Words Mani Bhai

[Mani16]

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Thanks Aniz bhai:)

nice poetry mani.....

nice work...........

[Mani16]

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Thanks Farhan Bro,,,:)

Nice

[Mani16]

Re: Aankhen bheeg jati hain,,,,,,,, (My Own)

Lafz kisi ki jageer nhi hote
Understood...
Or moonh pe haath rekh k khee khee kerne se ehle ye b dekh lain k Wasi shah ki Ghazal or main ne nazm likhi hy
or rehi baat Copy kerne ki tu agar muhay Copy he kerni hoti tu kisi sha,ir ki krta
& 4 yo kind information Wasi shah Poetry maang k Books chhapta hy uski apni poetry tu isi kisam ki (jana apni grhi badlo)
Ye Poetrey hy wasi shah ki
Or ye aankhen bheeg jati hai b kis se maangi hy usnay iska na aap ko pta hy na mujhay
Baat kerne or moonh per haath rekh k khee khee kerne se pehle sochna chahiye k main kia keh reha hoon

Hope u don't mind
Or agar mind karengi b tu mujhay koi khaas fark nhi parhta O.K:khi:

v nice ji

wasi shah ko copy kiya hai ap nay yahan :hehe:..lakin acha lhika hai..

[Mani16]

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Thanks Kemu:)

awesome

Thanks Alot Breez:rose

nice work and poetry :thmbup:

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

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[center]Lafz kisi ki jageer nhi hote
Understood...
Or moonh pe haath rekh k khee khee kerne se ehle ye b dekh lain k Wasi shah ki Ghazal or main ne nazm likhi hy
or rehi baat Copy kerne ki tu agar muhay Copy he kerni hoti tu kisi sha,ir ki krta
& 4 yo kind information Wasi shah Poetry maang k Books chhapta hy uski apni poetry tu isi kisam ki (jana apni grhi badlo)
Ye Poetrey hy wasi shah ki
Or ye aankhen bheeg jati hai b kis se maangi hy usnay iska na aap ko pta hy na mujhay
Baat kerne or moonh per haath rekh k khee khee kerne se pehle sochna chahiye k main kia keh reha hoon

Hope u don't mind
Or agar mind karengi b tu mujhay koi khaas fark nhi parhta O.K:khi:

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sachi baat ka itna gusaaaaa



main nay kab kaha keh ap nay wasi shah ki ya kis ki poem ya gazal lhiki hai ya words kis jageer ya wht eva


me nay bas yeh kaha keh wasi shah ki b aisi poem ya gahzal jo b hai


or yeh sach he hai..jabhi u ko itni marchi lagi hai:kr::kr:

lagi hai tu me ko b koi farq nahi parta:lpop::lpop::lpop:

[Mani16]

Re: Aankhen bheeg jati hain,,,,,,,, (My Own)

Meri jaan Mujhay mirchi nhi lagi Afsos hua hy k aap ne mujhay compare b kia tu 1 bhikari k 7 jo kabhi Poetry Perchase kerta hy tu kabhi maangta hy
Wesay agar aap mirchiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii samjhti hain tu aap ki apni soch Mai kia keh sakta hoon:donno:

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sachi baat ka itna gusaaaaa



main nay kab kaha keh ap nay wasi shah ki ya kis ki poem ya gazal lhiki hai ya words kis jageer ya wht eva


me nay bas yeh kaha keh wasi shah ki b aisi poem ya gahzal jo b hai


or yeh sach he hai..jabhi u ko itni marchi lagi hai:kr::kr:

lagi hai tu me ko b koi farq nahi parta:lpop::lpop::lpop:

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

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i m not ur Jaan Mr....jus mind ur lang ok



2ndly mujay kisi say koi lena dena keh kon poetry mangta hai ya kaya kerta hai.....na mujay ap say koi lena dena hai...ap jis ki marzi copy ker k jo marzi lhiko...


or 3rdly jab ap nay kisi ki copy ker k apni poetry lhikhi he hai tu ..us baat ko maannay ka b hosla rakho...yeh nahi keh....jo kahay us k saath batmeezi shoro ker do......