Re: Hawa ko likhna jo aagaya hai!
Noshi Gailani ki yeh nazam buhat hee khoobsoorat hai onn ki baqi ki oetry ki tarah ......EK ajeeb sa sach aur hairatanagiz asar hai iss mein .....
aap nay ek line mis ki .....
Muhabbatoun mein guzarnay wali ruthoun ko na paaeidar likh det
k baad .....
Shajar ko bey Saya daar likh dey ....aur oss k baad last lines hoti hein :0 anyway ur designing is So Cute and neat ! .....
Keep it up !
Noshi Gailani ki yeh nazam buhat hee khoobsoorat hai onn ki baqi ki oetry ki tarah ......EK ajeeb sa sach aur hairatanagiz asar hai iss mein .....
aap nay ek line mis ki .....
Muhabbatoun mein guzarnay wali ruthoun ko na paaeidar likh det
k baad .....
Shajar ko bey Saya daar likh dey ....aur oss k baad last lines hoti hein :0 anyway ur designing is So Cute and neat ! .....
Keep it up !
Comment