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Re: yehh hamm tasleem karrttay hain
buhat he zaberdast...very nice:rose :rose
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Re: yehh hamm tasleem karrttay hain
:roseGreat Poetry
Great work:rose
Last edited by *Rida*; 23 November 2007, 21:08.
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Re: yehh hamm tasleem karrttay hain
Assalam-0-Alaikom
buht khobsorat ......main tu gum ho gai thi itni khobsorat poenm thi...bus aakhri word hi hosh mein lay aaya.....:)Comment
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Re: yehh hamm tasleem karrttay hain
thanx janabOriginally posted by *Rida* View Post
rida aap koo yehh poem pasand aaieee iss kaay lieyy thanx
this is my favourie poem also"Can you imagine what I would do if I could do all I can? "Comment
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Re: yehh hamm tasleem karrttay hain
bohut achi nazm hai..zabardast
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Re: yehh hamm tasleem karrttay hain
Great piece of work - Awesome :)Allah
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hmm...
ji sarfraz sahab aap ka design dekha aur acha laga...!!!
bas zara aap ne jo nazam design ki hai uss ka akhri lafaz dekhen
kiya woh "hoon" hi hai...?
nazam ko dekhtey huey mujhey tu lagta hai k woh lafaz "hain" hona chaiye...
over all acha hai design...Comment
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Re: yehh hamm tasleem karrttay hain
bahat khub janab :ff:
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Re: yehh hamm tasleem karrttay hain
thanx janab aoor ghaltee kee nishandshee kaa bhee thanxOriginally posted by Mind hackeR View Post
soory yahhan parr lafzz hainn aaiieyy gaa"Can you imagine what I would do if I could do all I can? "Comment
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