*~*~* Khwaab *~*~*

[Shaheen]

[*Rida*]

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Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
simple si poem hai aur simple hi designing lakin msg buht acha hai .....
impressive hai....

[Shaheen]

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Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
simple si poem hai aur simple hi designing lakin msg buht acha hai .....
impressive hai....

Wsalam
Ji Theek kaha aao nai Rida j ...mera khyal sai in alfaz ko zyada designing ki zarorat nahi hia yeh ek message hia ..........
pasand karna ka shukriya :salam::rose
Khush rahiy
ALlah hafiz

[Madiha kanwal]

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bohut khubsorat nazm hai or designing bi :phool:
but
urdu ki kuch mistakes hain :blush:

[Shaheen]

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bohut khubsorat nazm hai or designing bi :phool:
but
urdu ki kuch mistakes hain :blush:

pasand karna kaliy shukriya ...ghaltiyon kaliy mazrat khwah hon :rose

[DIL]

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Nazm DIL ko chho gayi :)

[Gul]

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Nice Msg!...really It is..!

[Shaheen]

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Nazm DIL ko chho gayi :)

Dil j ...SIrf dil ko nahi boht soo kai anzooo b baha daiti hai :)

[Shaheen]

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Nice Msg!...really It is..!

thanks g ..

[Wafa]

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wow.....nazam bohot pasand aae.....aur aap ne is ko designed bhi bohot acha kea hai......:thmbup:

[Shaheen]

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wow.....nazam bohot pasand aae.....aur aap ne is ko designed bhi bohot acha kea hai......:thmbup:

Shukriya Wafa g :rose :salam:

[DIL]

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Dil j ...SIrf dil ko nahi boht soo kai anzooo b baha daiti hai :)

Ji hasaas log ashkon ko baha ker b jazbaat ka izhar kertey hain :)

[Shaheen]

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Ji hasaas log ashkon ko baha ker b jazbaat ka izhar kertey hain :)

yeh rightly said :)

[BUS U HE]

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Zabardast Dear ....dil Ko Hila Denay Wali Poem Hai

[Shaheen]

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Thanks .... khush rahiy