Bhal� Dino ki Baat hai.

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Aik aur Koshish...

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Ahan Ahmed faraz ka ye kalam humein bohat pasand hay ....
Grade 12 se humaree diary mein mehfooz hay ye :)

lekin aap nay ek line kuch wrong likhi hai

Koi bhi rutt ho us ki jab .......

nahin hoga bulkey ye line yun hai

"Koi bhi Rutt ho Us ki Chhab"

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Ahan Ahmed faraz ka ye kalam humein bohat pasand hay ....
Grade 12 se humaree diary mein mehfooz hay ye :)

lekin aap nay ek line kuch wrong likhi hai

Koi bhi rutt ho us ki jab .......

nahin hoga bulkey ye line yun hai

"Koi bhi Rutt ho Us ki Chhab"

Thank you Eshaa... i make some changings in it.... :blush:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

ur Welcome :)
ab sahee hay mistake :)

[seeker]

ur Welcome :)
ab sahee hay mistake :)

Thank you again...:)

Hashar ho gya mera to...

[Madiha kanwal]

Beautiful composing:)

[seeker]

Beautiful composing:)

Shukriya Madii Dear :rose
Keep Smiling @lways...:)

[Shaima CUTE]

[*Rida*]

Assalam-0-Alaikom:rose
hmmmm.........
nice work....poetry bhi khooob hai.....

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