Faiz Ahmed faiz

[Muhammad Khalil]

:)

[Gul]

Re: Faiz Ahmed faiz

Hmm.....yeh pehli baar parhi ...... Nice Thanx for sahring ...!!

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Faiz Ahmed faiz

Thanksss

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Faiz Ahmed faiz

ahan
humaree most fav: nazm hay ye .....teena saani ki aawaz mein boht suni hay humnay ye .......:) thanks for sharing dear :rose


lekin chhoti choti mistakes hain imla ki . jessay first line mein aap nay ho ghalat likha "hathi walay hey "se likha jaey ga
humdum bhi hathi wali hay se likha jata hay

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Faiz Ahmed faiz

ahan
humaree most fav: nazm hay ye .....teena saani ki aawaz mein boht suni hay humnay ye .......:) thanks for sharing dear :rose


lekin chhoti choti mistakes hain imla ki . jessay first line mein aap nay ho ghalat likha "hathi walay hey "se likha jaey ga
humdum bhi hathi wali hay se likha jata hay

main ghaltian jaan booj ker kerta hun taky pata chal jay k kis ny sari read kee hay................

waisy main ny khudh bee yeh nahi pari bus likh di hay

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Faiz Ahmed faiz

main ghaltian jaan booj ker kerta hun taky pata chal jay k kis ny sari read kee hay................

waisy main ny khudh bee yeh nahi pari bus likh di hay

Achaaaa ji

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Faiz Ahmed faiz

Achaaaa ji

ahoo gee

[Wafa]

Re: Faiz Ahmed faiz

bohot ache nazam hai..me ne nazam poori parhe :D...very good..:thmbup:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Faiz Ahmed faiz

ahoo gee

hallla, fer khair hay :lpop:

[*Rida*]

Re: Faiz Ahmed faiz

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
yeh mujhay bhi bay had pasand hai
share karnay ka shukriyaaa
aisi ghaltiyoon say khobsorti mand per jati hai composition ki

[seeker]

Re: Faiz Ahmed faiz

its nice Khalil :)

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: Faiz Ahmed faiz

aha nice sharing hai jee

yakeen karey tou problem aur na karey tou problem
jaye tou jaye kaha.
:donno:

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Faiz Ahmed faiz

yehan pegham per hee rahin.

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: Faiz Ahmed faiz

yehan pegham per hee rahin.

acha aap kehtey hai tou reh hi letey hai.

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Faiz Ahmed faiz

ab jana nahi hay....................choar ker