~~Nazar Aak dhang se Eid ho"

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Adaab!!!

go k hum zara nikammay hain :embarasse ghazal nazm design karnay mein :blush: . ..lekin aaj try kar hee li humnay bhi...:blush:
Ye nazm hamein boht pasand hai ...Aur hamare swetu c Ummid ji nay share ki thi Bazm - e- shairy mein ...:phool:

[Masood]

Re: ~~Nazar Aak dhang se Eid ho"

Chaand ko kheench ker lamba kar diya na BIBI apney dimagh ki tarha :p ... achha image hai BIBI - khush raho :p

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~~Nazar Aak dhang se Eid ho"

Chaand ko kheench ker lamba kar diya na BIBI apney dimagh ki tarha :p ... achha image hai BIBI - khush raho :p

to aap bata nahin saktay thay khair hamein maloom hai is mein ek mistake aur bhi hai :embarasse , jo aap nay note nahin ki ...lekin ab hum nahin sahe kar rahay thak gaey itni baree nazm thi

[shakeeel]

Re: ~~Nazar Aak dhang se Eid ho"

bohat umda
(mistake " wohi rang ho wohi roshni")
mein ne is ko short kar ke nazam copetition mein share kiya hai

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~~Nazar Aak dhang se Eid ho"

bohat umda
(mistake " wohi rang ho wohi roshni")
mein ne is ko short kar ke nazam copetition mein share kiya hai

ji bhai :embarasse hum sahee ker lein gay isey
shukriya pasand kernay ka :phool:

[DIL]

Re: ~~Nazar Aak dhang se Eid ho"

Nice work :)

[maha]

Re: ~~Nazar Aak dhang se Eid ho"

bohat khoob

[ummid]

Re: ~~Nazar Aak dhang se Eid ho"

Adaab!!!

go k hum zara nikammay hain :embarasse ghazal nazm design karnay mein :blush: . ..lekin aaj try kar hee li humnay bhi...:blush:
Ye nazm hamein boht pasand hai ...Aur hamare swetu c Ummid ji nay share ki thi Bazm - e- shairy mein ...:phool:

ahan.... bauhat khoob esha ji...:rose

[Wafa]

Re: ~~Nazar Aak dhang se Eid ho"

wow dear eshaa ji :phool: ...designing bohot he pasand aae.....aur nazam bhi kaafi ache hai.......keep designing nazamein...

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~~Nazar Aak dhang se Eid ho"

ahan.... bauhat khoob esha ji...:rose

Thanks Dear:phool:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~~Nazar Aak dhang se Eid ho"

wow dear eshaa ji :phool: ...designing bohot he pasand aae.....aur nazam bhi kaafi ache hai.......

Thanks deaaroooo :phool: ye nazm hamein boht pasand hai:eye:

keep designing nazamein...

Okkk:embarasse :embarasse :embarasse

[Wafa]

Re: ~~Nazar Aak dhang se Eid ho"

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Thanks deaaroooo :phool: ye nazm hamein boht pasand hai:eye:

[color=black]Okkk:embarasse :embarasse :embarasse

You r most welcome dear eshaa ji.......

[*Rida*]

Re: ~~Nazar Aak dhang se Eid ho"

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

buht khobsorti say compose kia hai ...:phool:
nazam mairi bhi fav hai ....

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: ~~Nazar Aak dhang se Eid ho"

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

buht khobsorti say compose kia hai ...:phool:
nazam mairi bhi fav hai ....

WaAlaikum Assalam ,
Thanks sweet sis :eye: :phool:

['SamRazi']

Re: ~~Nazar Aak dhang se Eid ho"

buhut khoobsurat