~ Deevar ~

[aik_lerki]

Aa'y Hawa'on
Mera pegham un tak pohcha aao
Unhain kehna
Ky mohabbat main bad gumani ki ek deevar se khare hai
Aur kehty hain ky bad gumani ki fiza main
Jazby mar jatay hain
So is deevar ky mazeed buland hony sy pehly
Jazbon ky marnay sy pehly
Tum aa ker is deevar ko gira dalo !!

[shakeeel]

Re: ~ Deevar ~

wow......this is a beautiful Nazam.

[Nav]

Re: ~ Deevar ~

beautiful

[Yaaram]

Re: ~ Deevar ~

hmmmmm boat umdah
Aik galti nikaloN kya
Acha nikal deta hon
wo 2nd line main "puhancha" ka noon nahi dikh raha hay :khi:
Bohat achi designing ki hay :)

[*Rida*]

Re: ~ Deevar ~

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

niceeeeeeeee poem with nice composing

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~ Deevar ~

wow......this is a beautiful Nazam.

Thankx Shakeel:)

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~ Deevar ~

beautiful

Thankz :D:

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~ Deevar ~

hmmmmm boat umdah
Aik galti nikaloN kya
Acha nikal deta hon
wo 2nd line main "puhancha" ka noon nahi dikh raha hay :khi:
Bohat achi designing ki hay :)

Thankx Yaaram :eye:

umm haan yay galte to hai ..:embarasse
Ab kiya karon.. :(
well samajh to aa raha hai na..aise he sahe ha ab ..:D

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~ Deevar ~

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

niceeeeeeeee poem with nice composing

Thankx Rida For Appriciation :eye:

[Masood]

Re: ~ Deevar ~

Bohat pyari nazam hai Komal aur yeh kalam kis ka hai?

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~ Deevar ~

Bohat pyari nazam hai Komal aur yeh kalam kis ka hai?

Thankx Masood :eye:
Umm ye to nahe pata mujhy..:embarasse
ek baat bataon..:khi:
yay nazm mai ny apne cuz ky college ke deevar per likhe hoe perhe the .. Mujhy bohat bohat pasand ae the ..to ma ny gher aa ker apny pas note ker le the:D: