Ab ky yonn dil ko saza di hum nay

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Assalam_O_Alikum WR WB

uuuuuuuuuuuuufffffff u logo kay haath nahi thkaty :embarasse

kitni lambi ghzalin likhaty ho /... 2 hours lag gy me ko :fuming:

Ab kisi nay aagr koi Ghalti nikali na to Goli maar du ga

Tareefd pahaly karna :wk

Ghalati baad main

1st time share ki hay na .. izzat rakh lo na kya jata hay :D

FeaamnAllah :lpop::lpop:

[tauruskhan]

Re: Ab ky yonn dil ko saza di hum nay

kia kia yaad dila dia tum ney
ajj to pir rula dia tum ney
main to apni masti main mast tha
kion akhir yeh post ker dia tum ney

:tauba :tauba

[Say_lani]

Re: Ab ky yonn dil ko saza di hum nay

bohot khoub

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Ab ky yonn dil ko saza di hum nay

kia kia yaad dila dia tum ney
ajj to pir rula dia tum ney
main to apni masti main mast tha
kion akhir yeh post ker dia tum ney

:tauba :tauba

Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

Bhot khoob ... aur yaad karo :d

FeaamnAllah :lpop::lpop:

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Ab ky yonn dil ko saza di hum nay

bohot khoub

Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

Bhots hukrya saylani pasnd karnay ka

FeaamNAllah

[shakeeel]

Re: Ab ky yonn dil ko saza di hum nay

bohat umda.....aur is lihaz se improvment bhi hai k is bar sirf ek ghalti hai:
bata dun.....chalo rehne do aap ka nazuk dil toot jaye ga........
lekan yar agar aaj ghalti na batai to aaienda ghaltian theek kese hon gi...????
(aakhri shehr mein LOTA nahin hai, LUTA hai)
naraz na hona..........composing bohat umda ki hai

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Ab ky yonn dil ko saza di hum nay

Wa Alaikum Assalam ,
ji aapki ghalti to bata dee gaeey hai ...Wessay ..sach kahoon
great work:thmbup: keep it up :clap:

[tauruskhan]

Re: Ab ky yonn dil ko saza di hum nay

Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

Bhot khoob ... aur yaad karo :d

FeaamnAllah :lpop::lpop:

walikum as salam

yeh lolipop app ko bi khaney ki adat hay
aik wo me here haain , unhoon ney pehgam waloon kay lolipop sarey kahatam ker deeya haan and ab app bi un ka sath dena shorow ho gaee han

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Ab ky yonn dil ko saza di hum nay

Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

Thx jhumroo dekhonga dubra :)

Aur aagy aur bahter karonga

FeaamnAllah

['SamRazi']

Re: Ab ky yonn dil ko saza di hum nay

buhut khoob ....mei ne bhi yeh gazal compose ki thi magar roman urdu mai :)

[Aania]

Re: Ab ky yonn dil ko saza di hum nay

good one... lekin urdu imla main mistakes... hain abhi... :lol aahista aahista theek ho jaao ge... wo to abhi tak meri theek nahen huiin :lol: yaa inpage kertey huye kuch.. lag pata jata hai... :cry

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Ab ky yonn dil ko saza di hum nay

walikum as salam

yeh lolipop app ko bi khaney ki adat hay
aik wo me here haain , unhoon ney pehgam waloon kay lolipop sarey kahatam ker deeya haan and ab app bi un ka sath dena shorow ho gaee han

Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

Oyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy us ka naam na lo .... Aafat hay , Qyamat hay wo :tauba.... Us ko dekh kar to merio bolti band ho jaati hay ... usy duur rakho bhi ... :dua

us nay meri lolly pop churai hay :fuming:

FeaamnAllah :lpop::lpop:

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Ab ky yonn dil ko saza di hum nay

bohat umda.....aur is lihaz se improvment bhi hai k is bar sirf ek ghalti hai:
bata dun.....chalo rehne do aap ka nazuk dil toot jaye ga........
lekan yar agar aaj ghalti na batai to aaienda ghaltian theek kese hon gi...????
(aakhri shehr mein LOTA nahin hai, LUTA hai)
naraz na hona..........composing bohat umda ki hai

Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

Hahahahh nahi yaar naraz nahi hu .... bass khushi ho ti hay ...

wasy ishq main nakmi ky baad LOTA hi rah jata hay :kr:

2nd time care karu ga :D

Pasnd karnay ka shukriya

FeaamnAllah :lpop::lpop:

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Ab ky yonn dil ko saza di hum nay

buhut khoob ....mei ne bhi yeh gazal compose ki thi magar roman urdu mai :)

Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

tumhary aur mery khyalaat kitnay milaty hay na :wk

FeaamnAllah :lpop::lpop:

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Ab ky yonn dil ko saza di hum nay

good one... lekin urdu imla main mistakes... hain abhi... :lol aahista aahista theek ho jaao ge... wo to abhi tak meri theek nahen huiin :lol: yaa inpage kertey huye kuch.. lag pata jata hai... :cry

Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

ya to tum nay sahi kha .. me ko bhi ahsaas hay per batow aaj maloom hua ky kash Cheeting kar ky pass na hua ho ta

Per cheeting aur Cute BP na kary asa ho bhi nhi sakta

Thx care karu ga next time

FeaamnAllah :lpop::lpop: