Dekh Lo Khuwab Magar...

[Aania]

:rose

[RulzZ]

Re: Dekh Lo Khuwab Magar...

Loog Jal jaiNgaiy sooraj ki taman'na na karoo.. wahh
bohot khubsorat kalam hai, thanks for sharing..

[tauseeftariq]

Re: Dekh Lo Khuwab Magar...

Rakh guzrey howy lamhon ke Khreda lekha hai as jaga Kureda
ho ga shid??

kawab bechoo key, ya bachoon key??

ghazal achi hai.. mery pass bhi as tarah ke ek ghzal hai asi qafiaya main kabhi fusat mili tu desigen ker key share karoon ga..

[Aania]

Re: Dekh Lo Khuwab Magar...

thnx Scorpian..
thnx tauseef.. actually i didnt proof-read.. so had to re-make it...
i ll post the correct version.. soon... thnx for .. ur great replies... be happy always...

[ADNAN.S]

Re: Dekh Lo Khuwab Magar...

very nice.....pic ka size thora bara hai

[Aania]

Re: Dekh Lo Khuwab Magar...

very nice.....pic ka size thora bara hai

yeah... have noticed.. ll care it next time.... thnx ne-ways...

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Dekh Lo Khuwab Magar...

nice work aania...:thmbup:
lekin 2 words sahi nahin hai..is mein
correct sh'r
Khwab Bachon k khilonon ki terha hotay hain
second correction
raakh guzrey huey lamhon ki kureda na karo

[Aania]

Re: Dekh Lo Khuwab Magar...

nice work aania...:thmbup:
lekin 2 words sahi nahin hai..is mein
correct sh'r
Khwab Bachon k khilonon ki terha hotay hain
second correction
raakh guzrey huey lamhon ki kureda na karo

yeah have noticed... n re-made version is here..

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Dekh Lo Khuwab Magar...

yeah have noticed... n re-made version is here..

hmm quick service...:thmbup: :rose

[Aania]

Re: Dekh Lo Khuwab Magar...

hmm quick service...:thmbup: :rose

tried so.... thnx ya :lol

[neelum]

Re: Dekh Lo Khuwab Magar...

bachi great.

[Aania]

Re: Dekh Lo Khuwab Magar...

bachi great.

bachi????????? :na::na::na:

thnx to like it... :blush:

['SamRazi']

Re: Dekh Lo Khuwab Magar...

ah han ..very nice :rose

[Aania]

Re: Dekh Lo Khuwab Magar...

ah han ..very nice :rose

thnx... khusho khurmi rahye...