*** Aik Kahani Kaghaz Per ***

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[ambreen_shaam]

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very nice sharing

[lucky]

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bohat hi achi designing hai :)

[Ismail Ajaz]

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masha Allah KhoobSoorat Khayaalaat paRhne ko mile
meree jaanib se DheroN daad aap kee nazr,kuchh baaten jo mujhe dikhaa'ee deeN aap kee taiHreer meN agar unpar thoRee see tawajjoh deN tow mazeed baihtaree aur nikhaar aa'ey gaa

she'r # 3 meN ke miSra e oolaa meN lafz (teraa) se she'r kee KhoobSooratee mut'aaCCir horahee hai (teraa) ko (tumhaaraa) meN badal deejiye baat wohee ho gee aur miSra e Caanee se lafz (ek) nikaal deejiye aur thoRaa saa radd o badal keejiye taakeh wazn aur she'r ke paRhne meN rawaanee qaa'im rahe aur urdu kee chaashnee uske paRhne aur sunne waale maiHsoos kareN

jaise keh

apnaa tumhaaraa Haal kahooN ,kuchh dukhRaa ro'uN dunyaa kaa
aisee Soorat meN bhee ikk bantee hai kahaanee kaaGhaz par

she'r # 5 meN dooSre miSre meN lafz (jo) shaamil keejiye jaise keh

shaayad mere kamre meN woh aayaa thaa kal mere baad
lauT gayaa jo chhoR ke apnaa phool nishaanee kaaGhaz par

aaKhree she'r dekhiye

sargoshee meN kaihne ko bhee jab kuchh baateN hoteeN haiN
kyuN likkhooN jo ho saktee hai baat zubaanee kaaGhaz par


meree jaanib se iss KhoobSoorat kaavish par ek baar phir se bhar poor daad aur ko'ee baat tabee'at par giraaN guzree ho tow maazirat

Khairandesh

[Rosy]

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bahut umda design kiya hai aapne......

[Mr.Khan]

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Beautiful designing