Bikherne se rokey koi

['SamRazi']

:rose

[Masood]

Re: Bikherne se rokey koi

Kaanp uthti hoon main soch key tanhaee mein
merey chehrey peh tera naam na parh ley koi
koi aahat, koi aawaz, koi chaap nahin
dil ki galiyaan badi sunsaan hain, aaey koi

Bohat khoobsurat kalaam share kiya hai aap ney Saima - very nice :rose

[Fatima Asad]

Re: Bikherne se rokey koi

aslaam_u_alikam
waah samia ji bohat hi khubsoorat laga aap ka andaaz

[*Rida*]

Re: Bikherne se rokey koi

Saima jee buht khubsorat andaz main pesh kia hai aap nay perveen shakir ki is ghazal ko

[sheem]

Re: Bikherne se rokey koi

wooow bohat hi achi sharing hai saima aur composing b

par kuch words hain jo sahi se show nahi ho rhe hain anyways

nice try

keep it up

['SamRazi']

Re: Bikherne se rokey koi

Kaanp uthti hoon main soch key tanhaee mein
merey chehrey peh tera naam na parh ley koi
koi aahat, koi aawaz, koi chaap nahin
dil ki galiyaan badi sunsaan hain, aaey koi

Bohat khoobsurat kalaam share kiya hai aap ney Saima - very nice :rose

Thnx Masood :rose

['SamRazi']

Re: Bikherne se rokey koi

aslaam_u_alikam
waah samia ji bohat hi khubsoorat laga aap ka andaaz

Shukriya Fatima :phool:

['SamRazi']

Re: Bikherne se rokey koi

Saima jee buht khubsorat andaz main pesh kia hai aap nay perveen shakir ki is ghazal ko

Shukriay Rida :rose

['SamRazi']

Re: Bikherne se rokey koi

wooow bohat hi achi sharing hai saima aur composing b

par kuch words hain jo sahi se show nahi ho rhe hain anyways

nice try

keep it up

Sarey word show ho rahey to hain sab ko, u ko kiu nahi :cc: ......... U ne chashma nahi lagaya ho gaya :p :khi:


Thnx for appreciating