Tumhain udaas dekh ker

[Mani16]

[Tanha Hassan]

Re: Tumhain udaas dekh ker

beautiful sharing

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Tumhain udaas dekh ker

bahot khoob janab good work

[thefire1]

Re: Tumhain udaas dekh ker

Walaikum Assalaam

Kia baat hay janab, shaaeri bohat hi khoobsuart aur uss per itna attractive design, bohat hi khoobsurat alfaaz hain aur frame, color, background image, font and its style, sab kuch bohat acha lag raha hay.... GOOD JOB DONE :), keep sharing such wonderful work with us, Khush rahyeh

[Rosy]

Re: Tumhain udaas dekh ker

walikumsalaam

bahut khoob......

[Mani16]

Re: Tumhain udaas dekh ker

beautiful sharing

bahot khoob janab good work

Thank Alot FrnDZ

[Mani16]

Re: Tumhain udaas dekh ker

walikumsalaam

bahut khoob......

Thanks Alot ROSY

[Mani16]

Re: Tumhain udaas dekh ker

Walaikum Assalaam

Kia baat hay janab, shaaeri bohat hi khoobsuart aur uss per itna attractive design, bohat hi khoobsurat alfaaz hain aur frame, color, background image, font and its style, sab kuch bohat acha lag raha hay.... GOOD JOB DONE :), keep sharing such wonderful work with us, Khush rahyeh

Bht Bht Shukriaaaa janab:salam:

[Mani16]

Re: Tumhain udaas dekh ker

thats a good effort, but still text needs attention.

I Hope U Can Undrstnd Dis Imoticon :donno: :donno: :donno:

[Mani16]

Re: Tumhain udaas dekh ker

mani koshish achi hai ... But ..... " kisi "mosam" ko yun " hona chahiey tha .... Baki txt per mazeed mehnat ho skti thi .....

Infact This was 'Kisi k Mosmo ko yun'
Mistake
Realy ThanX
Aap i think 1st hain jinhon ne ye ghalti Nikali hy,
It mean Aapne ghor se parha hy
Thanks Alot janab
Thanks Alot

[Mani16]

Re: Tumhain udaas dekh ker

mani koshish achi hai ... But ..... " kisi "mosam" ko yun " hona chahiey tha .... Baki txt per mazeed mehnat ho skti thi .....

Bilkul Text Behter ho sakta tha agar aap k jesa koi Teacher Mil jata tu

[*Hala*]

Re: Tumhain udaas dekh ker

w/salam
zabardast!! fvrt nazam hai or app ni khubsurat kaam ki ahia

[Mani16]

Re: Tumhain udaas dekh ker

w/salam
zabardast!! fvrt nazam hai or app ni khubsurat kaam ki ahia

Thank You sisuuuuuuu