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G Dosto aapki nazar meri ani new ghazal
pasand na aye tu btana must hy eemandari se
pasand na aye tu btana must hy eemandari se
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Re: Zaurat rehi tu hy (My Own Poetry)
Waah Mani16 kia likha hay aap nay, har ek misra tareef kay qaabil hay bilkhusoos iss shaair nay tou jaan hi lay lee :)
Yeh aur baat aks-e-zamana bhi tha magar
Meray sukhun main teri shbahat rahi tou hay
Iss baar frame kuch peekhi see lag rahi hay magar shaaeri main itna wazan hay kay shayed koi achi frame bhi hoti tou woh bhi pheeki hi lagti... bohat khoob janab, aap zaroor likha karain, kaafi nafasat aur sachayi hay aap kay kalaaam main... Keep sharing :)sigpic -
Re: Zaurat rehi tu hy (My Own Poetry)
waah mani sahib bahot khoobsurat Ghazal likhi hai aap nesigpic
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Re: Zaurat rehi tu hy (My Own Poetry)
wah janab wah..kya khoob ..waqaii woh shabahat waala sher bada hi accha hai...Comment
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Re: Zaurat rehi tu hy (My Own Poetry)
This was an awesome poem... and beautiful designed.
u can't gain RESPECT by choice nor by requesting it... it is earned through your words & actions."
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Re: Zaurat rehi tu hy (My Own Poetry)
Originally posted by thefire1 View PostBoht Boht Nawazish hazoor
Yaar kia kerta ghazal bhi itni lambi thi k samajh he nhi areha tha kese design karoon so jaldi me 'jesa hy jehaan hy' ki base pe share ker dia
zarra nawazi hy aapki k aapne phir bhi itni tareef se nawaza hy:salam:
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Re: Zaurat rehi tu hy (My Own Poetry)
Originally posted by *Hala* View PostThis was an awesome poem... and beautiful designed.Thank You so much sissssssssssssssssss:rose :salam: :rose
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Re: Zaurat rehi tu hy (My Own Poetry)
Originally posted by shummu View PostBoht boht shukria shummu G
Tareef ker ne k liye
aapne seprate sub forum ka keha tha agar aapko yaad ho tu
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