Abhi Kuch Roz Pehle Tak (My Own oetry)

[Mani16]

Assalaam-o-Alykum FrndZ
meri ani koshish hy agar koi Dost Islaah Kray tu Wellcome :salam::rose

[jam1]

Re: Abhi Kuch Roz Pehle Tak (My Own oetry)

very nice.............!

[Mani16]

Re: Abhi Kuch Roz Pehle Tak (My Own oetry)

very nice.............!

:roseBht Bht Shukriaa Janab:rose
:salam:

[*Hala*]

Re: Abhi Kuch Roz Pehle Tak (My Own oetry)

w.salam
beautifull poetry and compositon...

[thefire1]

Re: Abhi Kuch Roz Pehle Tak (My Own poetry)

Bohat hi khoobsurat andaz main aap nay ashaar likhay hain, kafiyon ka tasalssul, lafzoon ka intikhaab, mouzoon per guftagoo, matlaa, maqtaa sab hi bohat hi achay andaaz main likha hay.... aap zaroor likhtay rahain, bohat achay likhtay hain aap.

[Mani16]

Re: Abhi Kuch Roz Pehle Tak (My Own oetry)

w.salam
beautifull poetry and compositon...

Bht Bht Thanksisssssssssssssssssssss Sis:dance2:salam:

[Mani16]

Re: Abhi Kuch Roz Pehle Tak (My Own poetry)

Bohat hi khoobsurat andaz main aap nay ashaar likhay hain, kafiyon ka tasalssul, lafzoon ka intikhaab, mouzoon per guftagoo, matlaa, maqtaa sab hi bohat hi achay andaaz main likha hay.... aap zaroor likhtay rahain, bohat achay likhtay hain aap.

Boht Boht shukriaa Bhai Jaan itni tafseeli Reply rne k liye :salam:salam:

[thefire1]

Re: Abhi Kuch Roz Pehle Tak (My Own oetry)

You are most welcome :)

[shummu]

Re: Abhi Kuch Roz Pehle Tak (My Own oetry)

wah wahhhhhhhhhh bahut umda ghazal aur bahut munfarid zameen... bahut accha laga parhke...daad qubool karien..!!!!:rose


P.S: aap kahein to aap ki shayri ke liye aapke naam ka ek alag section banwaa doon NAYE SHOARA mein..wahan bhi apne ye kalaam post kijiyega.

[Mani16]

Re: Abhi Kuch Roz Pehle Tak (My Own oetry)

wah wahhhhhhhhhh bahut umda ghazal aur bahut munfarid zameen... bahut accha laga parhke...daad qubool karien..!!!!:rose


P.S: aap kahein to aap ki shayri ke liye aapke naam ka ek alag section banwaa doon NAYE SHOARA mein..wahan bhi apne ye kalaam post kijiyega.

Banwa dain tu meherbani hogi G

Bht Bht shukriaa tareef k liye
Ek shair aapki reply k nazar

fasl tab he lgana jub parakh lena zameeno ko
Her Ik mitti ki fitrat me wafadaari nhi hoti

[sheem]

Re: Abhi Kuch Roz Pehle Tak (My Own oetry)

woow MashALlah bohat hi khoubsurat composing ki hai

agar pegham.com ya llogo laga dete tu or acha hojata

[Mani16]

Re: Abhi Kuch Roz Pehle Tak (My Own oetry)

woow MashALlah bohat hi khoubsurat composing ki hai

agar pegham.com ya llogo laga dete tu or acha hojata

Thanks Janab
Or ooper left side e Pegham.com likha hua hy
shaid aapko nazar nhi aya

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: Abhi Kuch Roz Pehle Tak (My Own oetry)

waah waah bahot he khoobsurat Ghazal likhi hai aap ne janab

[Mani16]

Re: Abhi Kuch Roz Pehle Tak (My Own oetry)

waah waah bahot he khoobsurat Ghazal likhi hai aap ne janab

Thanks Alot bossssssssssalam:

[maha17]

Re: Abhi Kuch Roz Pehle Tak (My Own oetry)

nice work mani ..........