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Tery Aany Ki Khbr Shaam Main Aa E
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Gham To Likha So Likha Taqdeer ny Meri Zindagi Main
Ye Raton Ko Der Tk Neend Na Ana Kis Gunaah Ki Saza Hai
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Re: Tery Aany Ki Khbr Shaam Main Aa E
w.salam
nice work jani
per be kuch kaami nazar aarahi hai or be behtar hostka hai...
frame ko buht thick raka hai... fontz color na to image sy match ho rahi hai na hai frame ki sath.. just try keep matching color ... dont mind :)
keep it up the goodu can't gain RESPECT by choice nor by requesting it... it is earned through your words & actions."
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Re: Tery Aany Ki Khbr Shaam Main Aa E
main kion mind kroon gi
main to chahti hoon k meri ghltiaan btaa e jayen taa k main correction kr sakon:)
thanx:)Gham To Likha So Likha Taqdeer ny Meri Zindagi Main
Ye Raton Ko Der Tk Neend Na Ana Kis Gunaah Ki Saza Hai
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Re: Tery Aany Ki Khbr Shaam Main Aa E
frame buht zabardast lag raha hai......:em:
words kay darmiyaan.....spacing ka bhi khayal rakha karain....
jaisay dil na kaam nahin ...... dil nakaam
6th line mein tu aur kisi kay darmiyaan space honi chahiye....
, comma kay bad space acha tausir daiti hai.......:)
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Re: Tery Aany Ki Khbr Shaam Main Aa E
Originally posted by muneeb143 View Postnice
Originally posted by *Rida* View Postframe buht zabardast lag raha hai......:em:
words kay darmiyaan.....spacing ka bhi khayal rakha karain....
jaisay dil na kaam nahin ...... dil nakaam
6th line mein tu aur kisi kay darmiyaan space honi chahiye....
, comma kay bad space acha tausir daiti hai.......:)
thanx alot:)Gham To Likha So Likha Taqdeer ny Meri Zindagi Main
Ye Raton Ko Der Tk Neend Na Ana Kis Gunaah Ki Saza Hai
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