Surkh Chilman meiN haseeN Taj Mahal ho jaise....!

[shummu]

Salaam Ahl-e-bazm!
Kamal Hatvi ka kalaam pesh kar rahi hoon...ummeed hai kalaam aur meri presentation dono pasand aayegi :)
Shumaila

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Surkh chilman meiN haseeN Taj Mahal ho jaise
Aap ka husn mohabbat ki ghazal ho jaise

Aao kuch der zamaane se kahiN duur chaleiN
YuN jiyaa jaaye keh bas aakhri pal ho jaise

kyoN nahi aata tujhe meri mohabbat pe yaqeeN?
kyoN ye lagta hai tere maaThe pe bal ho jaise?!

yuN qareeb aayeiN keh bichReiN to koi ranj na ho
saaNs lena bhi mohabbat meiN khalal ho jaise

yuN uThii jaise koii barq chamak jaaye kahiN
ik nazar saare sawaalaat ka hal ho jaise !!!

:) :) SHUKRIYA!

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Re: Surkh Chilman meiN haseeN Taj Mahal ho jaise....!

good presentation :thmbup: :rose

[shummu]

Re: Surkh Chilman meiN haseeN Taj Mahal ho jaise....!

Thanx a lot AANCHAL :)

[sheem]

Re: Surkh Chilman meiN haseeN Taj Mahal ho jaise....!

very nice sharing

keep it up:rose

[Yaaram]

Re: Surkh Chilman meiN haseeN Taj Mahal ho jaise....!

Bohat Umdah SHummu......thanx for sharing :)

[shummu]

Re: Surkh Chilman meiN haseeN Taj Mahal ho jaise....!

very nice sharing

keep it up:rose

thank u :)

[shummu]

Re: Surkh Chilman meiN haseeN Taj Mahal ho jaise....!

Bohat Umdah SHummu......thanx for sharing :)

thanx and welcome :)

[Masood]

Re: Surkh Chilman meiN haseeN Taj Mahal ho jaise....!

Bohat khoobsurat aur maahir tor per aap ney compose kiya hai shummu - nice :)

[shummu]

Re: Surkh Chilman meiN haseeN Taj Mahal ho jaise....!

bahut shukriya Masood sahab :)

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Surkh Chilman meiN haseeN Taj Mahal ho jaise....!

Asslam-o-AlikuM WR WB

kyoN nahi aata tujhe meri mohabbat pe yaqeeN?
kyoN ye lagta hai tere maaThe pe bal ho jaise?!

Bhot umda

FeaamnAllah

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Surkh Chilman meiN haseeN Taj Mahal ho jaise....!

great work

[shummu]

Re: Surkh Chilman meiN haseeN Taj Mahal ho jaise....!

Asslam-o-AlikuM WR WB

kyoN nahi aata tujhe meri mohabbat pe yaqeeN?
kyoN ye lagta hai tere maaThe pe bal ho jaise?!

Bhot umda

FeaamnAllah

thanx BP .. :rose waise aap ne nick bahut khoobsurat rakhaa hai go ke paRhte waqt ek udaasi ka ehsaas hota hai magar baDa shaayraana nick hai.. :thmbup:

[shummu]

Re: Surkh Chilman meiN haseeN Taj Mahal ho jaise....!

great work

thank u :)

[israr hashmi]

Re: Surkh Chilman meiN haseeN Taj Mahal ho jaise....!

Kya Baat HAi Cha gaeee hain aapm Shumailaaaaa
Yon Uthi Jaise Koi Burq Chamak jaye kahin
Ik Nazae sawallat ka hul ho jaisee

[shummu]

Re: Surkh Chilman meiN haseeN Taj Mahal ho jaise....!

bahut bahut nawaazish.............israr sahab :)

Khushaamdeed!!!