yeh Aarzuu thee

[Gul]

Re: yeh Aarzuu thee

:thmbup:

Pehli baar hee bataa deytay naa :( :(

Ok will do it again inshaAllah ........................372-shock

[Gul]

Re: yeh Aarzuu thee

yeh deykhein roman mein iss tarah tha .....


ye aarazuu thii tujhe gul ke ruu-ba-ruu karate

ye aarazuu thii tujhe gul ke ruu-ba-ruu karate
ham aur bul_bul-e-betaab guftaguu karate

[ruu-ba-ruu = in front of; guftaguu = conversation]

payaam bar na mayassar huaa to Khuub huaa
zabaan-e-Gair se kyaa shar kii aarazuu karate

[mayassar = available; shar = mischief]

merii tarah se maah-o-mahar bhii hai.n aavaaraa
kisii habiib ko ye bhii hai.n justajuu karate

[maah-o-mahar = moon and sun; habiib = friend]

jo dekhate terii za.njiir-e-zulf kaa aalam
asiir hone ke aazaad aarazuu karate

[asiir = prisoner]

na puuchh aalam-e-baragashtaa taali-e-"Aatish"
barasatii aag me.n jo baaraa.N kii aarazuu karate

[baragashtaa = turn around/against; baaraa.N = rain]
[taali-e-aatish = burning fate]

[Gul]

Re: yeh Aarzuu thee

waah behad khobsurat design kiya hai

Thanx Wasi Khush rahiyay ! :jazak:

[R A P T O R]

Re: yeh Aarzuu thee

:salam:..nice 1

[Fitna Dil]

Re: yeh Aarzuu thee

payaam bar na mayassar huaa to Khuub huaa
zabaan-e-Gair se kyaa shar kii aarazuu karate

[mayassar = available; sharah = Explaination]

and the makta as said by Masood

Take Care

[Fitna Dil]

Re: yeh Aarzuu thee

One thing more.
Makta main bargashtaa taali ikatha hai..bargashtaa taali Aatish darust hai....Aatish Shaair ka Takhalus hai,
Isay bargashta Taali e aatish kehna ghalt hai........do it as masood did......

[saraah]

Re: yeh Aarzuu thee

my fav gazal....my fav colour.....

[Mani16]

Re: yeh Aarzuu thee

Design or Choice to khoob hy agar ek ghalti na hoti tu Perfect design tha,,
2nd shair kuch istraah hy,,
"Payaam br na muyassar huya tu khoob huya"
"Zubaan-e-Gher se kia Shah-e-aarzoo kerte" ?