~usy dill say bhol jany ki koshish~

[Pehli``Barish]

Asalam o alikum
pegham k poet wasi anjum sahab ki aik khubsurat ghazal
design ki hai, aap sab ki nazar karti hon :ff:

[Z.]

Re: ~usy dill say bhol jany ki koshish~

cool composing ..... second last shair mey aap "nahee" ka "hey" miss ker gai hein aap :)

nice work :rose

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~usy dill say bhol jany ki koshish~

hhhhhaaan abhi dekha
thanks sis :ff:

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~usy dill say bhol jany ki koshish~

waaah bahoot khoob sameera
bahoot khoobsurati se designing kiya hai
aaj pehli baar mujhe apni poetry achhi lag rahi hai
bahoot bahoot shukriya

[Mani16]

Re: ~usy dill say bhol jany ki koshish~

Wasi bhai please Don't mind wese main 1 baar pehlay bhi 1 pegham k member ko thorha sa suggetion dia tha Poetry ka or uska nateeja bhi dekh liya lekin kia karoon aadat se mejboor hoon na
1 baat aapsay kehta hoon again please don't mind k aap ki Poetry main khiyal boht achha lga Wording bhi boht achhi hy lekin Poetry main wazan main bhi thorha up down hy is per bhi ghaore karen
Hope u'll don't mind

waaah bahoot khoob sameera

bahoot khoobsurati se designing kiya hai
aaj pehli baar mujhe apni poetry achhi lag rahi hai
bahoot bahoot shukriya

[Mani16]

Re: ~usy dill say bhol jany ki koshish~

Boht he khoobsoorat designing hy janab humain bhi sikhayen na

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~usy dill say bhol jany ki koshish~

waaah bahoot khoob sameera
bahoot khoobsurati se designing kiya hai
aaj pehli baar mujhe apni poetry achhi lag rahi hai
bahoot bahoot shukriya

aapko achi lagi mujhy bohat he khushi hoi :eye:
bohat shukriya :rose

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~usy dill say bhol jany ki koshish~

Boht he khoobsoorat designing hy janab humain bhi sikhayen na

main jo jo mistakes aap k designs per baataongi aap koshish kijiayega
k next time voh na hon... koi bhi design isi waqt khubsurat lagta hai
jab iska text clear ho :rose

[WASI ANJUM]

Re: ~usy dill say bhol jany ki koshish~

aapko achi lagi mujhy bohat he khushi hoi :eye:
bohat shukriya :rose

sirf achhi nahi bahoot he achhi lagi:)

[Mani16]

Re: ~usy dill say bhol jany ki koshish~

o.k insha Allah main koshish karoonga k wese main kafi posts share ki hain aap zra check ker k bta dijiyega k kesi hain

main jo jo mistakes aap k designs per baataongi aap koshish kijiayega
k next time voh na hon... koi bhi design isi waqt khubsurat lagta hai
jab iska text clear ho :rose

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~usy dill say bhol jany ki koshish~

ok bata dongi :ff:

[Mani16]

Re: ~usy dill say bhol jany ki koshish~

Thanks Alot

ok bata dongi :ff:

[Rai]

Re: ~usy dill say bhol jany ki koshish~

very Nice :rose

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~usy dill say bhol jany ki koshish~

thanks alot :ff:

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: ~usy dill say bhol jany ki koshish~

Thanks Alot

:rose