Kabhi Sajna Kabhi qangna ...... sweet ghazal 4 u

[Ali jee]

Salaam friends
aye ghazal bhi mere hey or desigend bhi kud kiya hey

go key ghazal khena Muskil kaam hey ........ or khas kar ghazal main kase ki tarif karna :) wo bhi bageer tajerbey
ya with out love

ak adna see try main bhi ki thi ........
dec main app Likhey thi app sub ki nazar karha hon ......... shyeed kase ko pasand ayjai ...... dua main yaad Rakhna

Ali

[Mani16]

Re: Kabhi Sajna Kabhi qangna ...... sweet ghazal 4 u

Bhai Jaan Aapka wazan Boht achha hy Wording kamzor hy
Soch bhi theek hy
I think k aapnay urdu main ziada tawjja nhi di

[Ali jee]

Re: Kabhi Sajna Kabhi qangna ...... sweet ghazal 4 u

hahahaha mani bhai .............. sunday key new paper kabhi uthalya karo mare wazan ka indaza bakhbi hojai ga ................ zabani baton sey kuch nahi hota .................. ya kho tu app ko apna majnoa qalaam sand karon ............. >?

[Gul]

Re: Kabhi Sajna Kabhi qangna ...... sweet ghazal 4 u

Bhai Jaan Aapka wazan Boht achha hy Wording kamzor hy
Soch bhi theek hy
I think k aapnay urdu main ziada tawjja nhi di

Mnai bahi ..aap k siggy mein sher kuch thek nahi ...

WO tu kuch ho gai tum se muhbbat warna
hum wo khudsar hein apni b tamnaah na karein ,,:)

I hope u will check it once!?

[Gul]

Re: Kabhi Sajna Kabhi qangna ...... sweet ghazal 4 u

Salaam friends
aye ghazal bhi mere hey or desigend bhi kud kiya hey

go key ghazal khena Muskil kaam hey ........ or khas kar ghazal main kase ki tarif karna :) wo bhi bageer tajerbey
ya with out love

ak adna see try main bhi ki thi ........
dec main app Likhey thi app sub ki nazar karha hon ......... shyeed kase ko pasand ayjai ...... dua main yaad Rakhna

Ali

Buhat romantice likhtay hein aap ..
Poet wahi hai jo saochy ossi tarah se ossay ....
Hawala-e Qirtaas kar dey .....

aap NEAY SHORA k section mein kion nahi iss ko share kartay ??

Nice designing ...Ali jee! :thmbup:

[Ali jee]

Re: Kabhi Sajna Kabhi qangna ...... sweet ghazal 4 u

Buhat romantice likhtay hein aap ..

Poet wahi hai jo saochy ossi tarah se ossay ....
Hawala-e Qirtaas kar dey .....

aap NEAY SHORA k section mein kion nahi iss ko share kartay ??

Nice designing ...Ali jee! :thmbup:

thank u gul jee ........... wohan bhi sharing ki hey gul jee wohan bhi post ki hey ehan just desi ki wajha sey post ki hey ........... gul jee husla afzee ka shakriya ... :rose

[Mani16]

Re: Kabhi Sajna Kabhi qangna ...... sweet ghazal 4 u

Bhai 1st of all tu sorry k main true comments day diye or 2nd ye k deewan bnanay se aadmi Poet nhi ben jata aap apna majmooa apnay Pass rakhain mujhay bhi chahiye tha k seb ki trah Good Great Nice likh deta chalo aainda khiyal rekhoonga
Take care

hahahaha mani bhai .............. sunday key new paper kabhi uthalya karo mare wazan ka indaza bakhbi hojai ga ................ zabani baton sey kuch nahi hota .................. ya kho tu app ko apna majnoa qalaam sand karon ............. >?

[Ali jee]

Re: Kabhi Sajna Kabhi qangna ...... sweet ghazal 4 u

Bhai 1st of all tu sorry k main true comments day diye or 2nd ye k deewan bnanay se aadmi Poet nhi ben jata aap apna majmooa apnay Pass rakhain mujhay bhi chahiye tha k seb ki trah Good Great Nice likh deta chalo aainda khiyal rekhoonga

Take care

Mnai bahi ..aap k siggy mein sher kuch thek nahi ...

WO tu kuch ho gai tum se muhbbat warna
hum wo khudsar hein apni b tamnaah na karein ,,:)

I hope u will check it once!?

jas ko bhai aye he maloom na ho :khi:

wo wazan radeef qafia bhair kiya jane ga:tauba

apna bohat khyal rakhna

or apna likha wo shair right karlo

[Wafa]

Re: Kabhi Sajna Kabhi qangna ...... sweet ghazal 4 u

Bhai 1st of all tu sorry k main true comments day diye or 2nd ye k deewan bnanay se aadmi Poet nhi ben jata aap apna majmooa apnay Pass rakhain mujhay bhi chahiye tha k seb ki trah Good Great Nice likh deta chalo aainda khiyal rekhoonga
Take care

dekho mani true comment dainay kay lea aap ko kisi nay mana nahi kea.....
aur baki agar good great ya nice likhtay hai.......tu jo unhein sahi lagta hai wo likhtay hai...........:)
poet kaisay bana jata hai.......ye un ko pata ho ga....abhi un ke beginning hai.....practice say improve ho jaye gi.........so plz apnay wordings ka khayaaal rakhay.........khush rahein......:)

[Wafa]

Re: Kabhi Sajna Kabhi qangna ...... sweet ghazal 4 u

Bohot achi ghazal likhe hai........aur designing bohot pasand aaye......keep it up....:rose

Mnai bahi ..aap k siggy mein sher kuch thek nahi ...

WO tu kuch ho gai tum se muhbbat warna
hum wo khudsar hein apni b tamnaah na karein ,,:)

I hope u will check it once!?

jas ko bhai aye he maloom na ho :khi:

wo wazan radeef qafia bhair kiya jane ga:tauba

apna bohat khyal rakhna

or apna likha wo shair right karlo

jab gul nay bata dea tha check karnay ko.....tu wo dekh laitay.....pher say kehna achi baat nahi.........:)

[Ali jee]

Re: Kabhi Sajna Kabhi qangna ...... sweet ghazal 4 u

wafa jee jaha tak baat wording ke hey ager main ney ehan apni wo ghazalin sharing jas ki wording ka matlab janey main bunda ahda hojai ga tu .kiya hoga ......... or phir bhi app ki aye he wish hey tu wording jalde app ko dekhon ga ......... rhi baat mani ki ya kase or ki tu ghazal ko samjhna har ak ki buss ki baat nahy .........aye ayzad azam nahi jo har dosra khedai ........... main ehan sharing ehan key meyaar key mutab karwaraha ....... phir bhi app ki wish hey tu ......... app ko wording he dekha don .....

2nd jaha tak good sune ki baat hey tu ......... tu mere apni he site bohat thi ...
lekin kase ki post bena soche samjhe comm karna ....... kuch baat samjh sey bhar hey ........han koy shayer comm karta tu zara maza ayta ....... ab mani jee
wo bhi bena soche samjhye ..........khiar ............... sorry to sey .........

next time khyal rahon ga ..........happy

bye

[Mani16]

Re: Kabhi Sajna Kabhi qangna ...... sweet ghazal 4 u

Main ye nhi kehta k main shair hoon lekin ALHAMD-O-LILLAH
itna tu zaroor hy k is Ghazal likhnay walay shair se tu boht achhi Poetry ker sakta hoon
Or rehi ye baaat k is Forum k Miyar k mutabik shairi likhi hy tu
ye is trah ghalat hy k miyar Forum nhi Belkay aapka hona hy or aapnay apna miyar dikha dia hy ye baat ker k or doosron ko aadmi wo cheez dikhta hy jo k hisab se sab se achhi hoti hy ye commen sens ki baat hy
or jiski seb achhi is trah ki hy woh buri kesi likhayga is ka andaza main tu lga chuka hoon kisi or bhi lgana hy tu ghazal 1 baar ghor se parh lay jsi main nhi dekha giya k main kia kese likh reha hoon
Belkay 1 esi taareef likhi gai hy jis k baaray main khud likhnay walay ko bhi nhi pta k kia likha hy
ye comments parh k i m sure k aapko boht ghussa aayega lekin mejboori ye hy such yehi hy
Allah Hafiz

or haan agar ye dekhna ho na k kis SHAIR nay aap per comments diye hain tu ye link check ker lijiyega aapko pta chal jayega k Kon shair hy jis nay tankeed ki hy
Mohabbat kis ko kehte hain
Kanwal
Hijabi sochain

wafa jee jaha tak baat wording ke hey ager main ney ehan apni wo ghazalin sharing jas ki wording ka matlab janey main bunda ahda hojai ga tu .kiya hoga ......... or phir bhi app ki aye he wish hey tu wording jalde app ko dekhon ga ......... rhi baat mani ki ya kase or ki tu ghazal ko samjhna har ak ki buss ki baat nahy .........aye ayzad azam nahi jo har dosra khedai ........... main ehan sharing ehan key meyaar key mutab karwaraha ....... phir bhi app ki wish hey tu ......... app ko wording he dekha don .....

2nd jaha tak good sune ki baat hey tu ......... tu mere apni he site bohat thi ...
lekin kase ki post bena soche samjhe comm karna ....... kuch baat samjh sey bhar hey ........han koy shayer comm karta tu zara maza ayta ....... ab mani jee
wo bhi bena soche samjhye ..........khiar ............... sorry to sey .........

next time khyal rahon ga ..........happy

bye

[Ali jee]

Re: Kabhi Sajna Kabhi qangna ...... sweet ghazal 4 u

[center]Main ye nhi kehta k main shair hoon lekin ALHAMD-O-LILLAH
itna tu zaroor hy k is Ghazal likhnay walay shair se tu boht achhi Poetry ker sakta hoon
Or rehi ye baaat k is Forum k Miyar k mutabik shairi likhi hy tu
ye is trah ghalat hy k miyar Forum nhi Belkay aapka hona hy or aapnay apna miyar dikha dia hy ye baat ker k or doosron ko aadmi wo cheez dikhta hy jo k hisab se sab se achhi hoti hy ye commen sens ki baat hy
or jiski seb achhi is trah ki hy woh buri kesi likhayga is ka andaza main tu lga chuka hoon kisi or bhi lgana hy tu ghazal 1 baar ghor se parh lay jsi main nhi dekha giya k main kia kese likh reha hoon
Belkay 1 esi taareef likhi gai hy jis k baaray main khud likhnay walay ko bhi nhi pta k kia likha hy
ye comments parh k i m sure k aapko boht ghussa aayega lekin mejboori ye hy such yehi hy
Allah Hafiz

or haan agar ye dekhna ho na k kis SHAIR nay aap per comments diye hain tu ye link check ker lijiyega aapko pta chal jayega k Kon shair hy jis nay tankeed ki hy
Mohabbat kis ko kehte hain
Kanwal
Hijabi sochain

aye sub batin bekar hey bro ............... bhas barye bhash kuch nahi Rakha hey in baton main ............. :)

main kuch bolon ga app kuch bolo gaye ................ as subject ko ehan he khtam karo ................................. :lpop:

hahaha sub bekar ki batin hey .......... kush raho ..................

by ALLAH HAFIZ

[Mani16]

Re: Kabhi Sajna Kabhi qangna ...... sweet ghazal 4 u

Behes ki baat nhi hy jaanab Baat ye hy k agar koi aapko seedhi baat kehta hy tu usko samajhna chahiye na k uski tardeed kro Or apnay apko sab se barha nhi smajhna nhi chahiye

aye sub batin bekar hey bro ............... bhas barye bhash kuch nahi Rakha hey in baton main ............. :)

main kuch bolon ga app kuch bolo gaye ................ as subject ko ehan he khtam karo ................................. :lpop:

hahaha sub bekar ki batin hey .......... kush raho ..................

by ALLAH HAFIZ

[Ali jee]

Re: Kabhi Sajna Kabhi qangna ...... sweet ghazal 4 u

:)

[center]Behes ki baat nhi hy jaanab Baat ye hy k agar koi aapko seedhi baat kehta hy tu usko samajhna chahiye na k uski tardeed kro Or apnay apko sab se barha nhi smajhna nhi chahiye

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choro mani bhai gussa or aye nazam pharo .......... kase lage