~!~ Mujhey Apney Hissar Mai Rakhna ~!~

[Mind hackeR]

AoA...!!!
meri apni likhi ghazal aik simple se design k saath share ker raha hon...!!!
umeed hai k pasand aye gee...!!!
aap sab frnds k comments ka wait ker raha hon...!!!
ahoo...!!!

[Mani16]

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Maza nhi aaya janab
Koi achhi C pOetry Kisi KHAS design main share karain Please

[sarfraz_qamar]

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nice jannab
aap main bohht guts hainn

[ABUHAMZA]

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:cc:well bro sorry to say bg text par havy ho kar text impression kharab kar rahi hai...............poetry is ok but design ..................:cc:
khair keep trying hope some day u can design beter than this

[Mind hackeR]

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Maza nhi aaya janab
Koi achhi C pOetry Kisi KHAS design main share karain Please

okz... :)
insha ALLAH abhi tu seekh raha hoon...!!!
zaroor design ker k achi si poetry share keroon ga... :)

[Mind hackeR]

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nice jannab
aap main bohht guts hainn

shukriya sarfraz ji... :)

[Mind hackeR]

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:cc:well bro sorry to say bg text par havy ho kar text impression kharab kar rahi hai...............poetry is ok but design ..................:cc:
khair keep trying hope some day u can design beter than this

thanx for pointing out dear... :)
yup m keep on trying bcz try try try again makes a man perfect one day insha ALLAH ... :)

[ABUHAMZA]

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thanx for pointing out dear... :)
yup m keep on trying bcz try try try again makes a man perfect one day insha ALLAH ... :)

zabardast mh as u did not mind the words which i said ......... cheer up the thing which i understand i have writen and i m not perfect always i can be mistaken .let wait for senior members ...waht they will say.......lets rock:rose

[Mind hackeR]

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zabardast mh as u did not mind the words which i said ......... cheer up the thing which i understand i have writen and i m not perfect always i can be mistaken .let wait for senior members ...waht they will say.......lets rock:rose

hmm...!!!
thanx malanga..!!!
ahoo...!!!

[Masood]

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MashaAllah - pehli baar aap ki kavish ko parh raha hoon Faisal aur I am impressed - bohat khoob soch ko bandha hai - uthney nahin diya JAALAM :p

[Gul]

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AoA...!!!
meri apni likhi ghazal aik simple se design k saath share ker raha hon...!!!
umeed hai k pasand aye gee...!!!
aap sab frnds k comments ka wait ker raha hon...!!!
ahoo...!!!

Alfaaz ka usage acha hai ....kahin kahin lagta hai sirf hum qafiya karnay ko aap nay lafz ko use kia ........But Phir b Buhat umda and really Attarctive designing ....simplicity and nice color.....:) keep it up...!:thmbup:

[Yaaram]

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Poetry+Designing bohat hi achi hay - awesome - frame to bohat hi pasand aaya mujhey :)

[Mani16]

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Bhai wakeyi aapnay mehnat ki hy
Lekin wo maza nhi tha jo hona chahiye
Aapki agli post ka intizar rahayga

okz... :)

insha ALLAH abhi tu seekh raha hoon...!!!
zaroor design ker k achi si poetry share keroon ga... :)

[Mind hackeR]

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MashaAllah - pehli baar aap ki kavish ko parh raha hoon Faisal aur I am impressed - bohat khoob soch ko bandha hai - uthney nahin diya JAALAM :p

thanx alotz masood bhai lekin aap ne pehli baar nai doseri baar perha hai mujhey pehli baar election waley section mai aap ne meri poem perhi thi "azam"... :)

[Mind hackeR]

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Alfaaz ka usage acha hai ....kahin kahin lagta hai sirf hum qafiya karnay ko aap nay lafz ko use kia ........But Phir b Buhat umda and really Attarctive designing ....simplicity and nice color.....:) keep it up...!:thmbup:

thanx alotz gul... :)
bas kabhi kabhi deemagh kharab ho tu kuch na kuch likh leta hon shayed iss liye aap ko woh pukhtagi nazar nai aa rahi jo aik achey aur manjhey huey poet mai hoti hai...!!!
ahoo...!!!