~*~Jhal Jate Hay~*~

[mindless]

Asaa||am-0-ALLikum:salam:

[*Hijab*]

Re: ~*~Jhal Jate Hay~*~

Walekam-Aslam, good work, keep designing!

[sufiaamir]

Re: ~*~Jhal Jate Hay~*~

good

[sarfraz_qamar]

Re: ~*~Jhal Jate Hay~*~

good work but thorraa text kee mistakes hain

[mindless]

Re: ~*~Jhal Jate Hay~*~

Tnxxxxxxxxx to all main apni alfaz ki kami door karny de kohish main laga hoo jado v door hoya tano v pata lag janga

[Mind hackeR]

Re: ~*~Jhal Jate Hay~*~

hmm...!!!
poetry achi hai...!!!
img ki tu kuch bhi samajh nai aa rai k kiya dikhaney ki koshish ki gai hai iss liye yeh nai kaha jaa sakta k img poetry se match kerta hai ya nai...!!!
text mai imla ki kuch ghaltiyan hain aur uss k ilawa text ki allignment bhi theek nai hai...!!!
border ki width bohut zada hai jiss ki wajah se border apni kashish kho chuka hai...!!!
mindless bhai u need lotz of practice to improve ur work...!!!
i hope u don mind...!!! :)

[*Hala*]

Re: ~*~Jhal Jate Hay~*~

nice one

[Mani16]

Re: ~*~Jhal Jate Hay~*~

Great Poetry Janab

[Mani16]

Re: ~*~Jhal Jate Hay~*~

Yehi baat aap PM Main bhi likh saktay thay Lekin aapko tu aadat hy
PANGA lainay ki
aap cheez kia hain boht barhay designer hain tu apnay kaam say kaam rakhain doosron ko kiyun tention daitay hain or kabhi koi apna karishma bhi dikha dain
k hamain bhi pta chalay k aap kitnay barhay designer hain

hmm...!!!

poetry achi hai...!!!
img ki tu kuch bhi samajh nai aa rai k kiya dikhaney ki koshish ki gai hai iss liye yeh nai kaha jaa sakta k img poetry se match kerta hai ya nai...!!!
text mai imla ki kuch ghaltiyan hain aur uss k ilawa text ki allignment bhi theek nai hai...!!!
border ki width bohut zada hai jiss ki wajah se border apni kashish kho chuka hai...!!!
mindless bhai u need lotz of practice to improve ur work...!!!
i hope u don mind...!!! :)