Ghazal Designing Competition---10 Days..!!

[Ameen Asim]

Re: Ghazal Designing Competition---10 Days..!!

Assalam o Alaikum

barra achha slsila shiroo kia hay aap nay, magar aik baat, jo Ghazal dia kareN us ko daikh lia kijiyay ke kia ye wazan meN hay?
matla kay donooN misrooN meiN jahaaN aap nay ( tairay ) likha hay udar tiray aay ga,
aur aakhri shehr ka pehla misra hi bay wazan dia hay aap nay,
maloom nahiN ke yeh kis ki Ghazal hay, yeh sirf aur sirf composing ki ghaltiaaN lagti heN ,
aakhri shehr kay pehlay misray kay aakhir meN agar aik lafz (kaheiN) ka izafa kar dia jaay to sher wazan meN ho jata hay,
jab hooa zikr zamaanay meN mahabbat ka kaheiN
yeh aik misaal hay,

umeed hay aap mairi araa say khafa nahiN hooN gay,

Wassalam
Ameen Asim

[Yaaram]

Re: Ghazal Designing Competition---10 Days..!!

Bhai hum shora hazrat ke kalam main apne se izafa nahi kar sakte hain.........

[Yaaram]

Re: Ghazal Designing Competition---10 Days..!!

aur yeh muqabla 7 September ko band ho jaye ga us se pehele pehele aap muqable main hissa le sakte hain

[Ameen Asim]

Re: Ghazal Designing Competition---10 Days..!!

Assalam o Alaikum

janaab Yaaram sahib
meN nahiN kehta ke sho'ara kay kalaam meN azaafa kia jaay koi shair to baywazan shairi nahiN karta,,, men nay arz kia k ye sirf aur sirf composing ki ghalti hay, kisi shair ki nahiN,,, aur agar kisi shair nay hi aisa kaha hay to ,,,,,,,,,,, meN idar khamoshi ikhtiaar karta hooN, umeed hay aap naraaz nahiN hooN gay,

Wassalam
Ameen Asim

Bhai hum shora hazrat ke kalam main apne se izafa nahi kar sakte hain.........

[Yaaram]

Re: Ghazal Designing Competition---10 Days..!!

hmmmmmmmm narazgi is main kya hay janab...........Main ne is ko kahin se parah tha to main ne is ko aise hi yahan likh dya main ne dobara chek kaya hay jesa wahan likha hay wahan hi hay yahan bhi :)

[ShAnI]

Re: Ghazal Designing Competition---10 Days..!!

Salam
Banda kuch haqeer si kosishon kay saath :)
aur 7th ko mein shamil nahien ho sakta tha coz mein nay join he 7Sep kay baad kiya :p

**SS WONDERS say ghabraiyay ga nahien mera logo hai ye :rose

[ShAnI]

Re: Ghazal Designing Competition---10 Days..!!

Another try...:)

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Re: Ghazal Designing Competition---10 Days..!!

sab ki kushish buhat achi hai ..... :thmbup:

main nay bhi hissa leena tha main pher late hoo gai :cr:

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[muskaan]

Re: Ghazal Designing Competition---10 Days..!!

lo ab kis ko vote doon mein sab nai bauhat hi khubsurat images banai hain :) is ka faisla mein akar karti hoon lekin faisla hai bauhat muskil :)

khush rahain sab :)

[Masood]

Re: Ghazal Designing Competition---10 Days..!!

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[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Ghazal Designing Competition---10 Days..!!

:rose

[handsome]

Re: Ghazal Designing Competition---10 Days..!!

Mughay to is terha kay images hi nahi miltay to compitition may ksay hisa lo :-s

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Ghazal Designing Competition---10 Days..!!

:rose