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Wo Tera Naam Tha
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bohot khoob.........:)sigpic
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Nic poetry!
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Assalam-0-Alaikom:rose
tammam kaam buht acha hai....kalaaam bhi .............:clap:
dont mind.......aik ghalti hai urdu ki mistake hai....second line mein...."raqsaan" hai word.....nuqtoooN wala ya qainchi wala qaaaf aaye gaa..:)
Last edited by *Rida*; 11 December 2006, 10:55.Comment
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Re: Wo Tera Naam Tha
Very Nice ji .....bus text kay edges kuch sahi nahi ayea :)Mainda Ziker Vi Tu'n, Mainda Fiker Vi Tu'nMainda Zoaq Vi Tu'n, Vajdaan Vi Tu'nMainda Aval, Akhir, Ander, BahirZahir Tey Pinha'an Vi Tu'nMainda Bakht Tey, Naam Nishan Vi Tu'nComment
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Re: Wo Tera Naam Tha
yaj!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
wah wah kamaal ki pasand hai. jo andaaz ap ka pasand karne ka hai !
hamein bhi pasand aya. app ka jo naam yaj hai woh samajh me nahin aya.
shayed app ko pasan hai! shair karte rahein hamari du a seComment
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Re: Wo Tera Naam Tha
nice work Yaj ji...
u can't gain RESPECT by choice nor by requesting it... it is earned through your words & actions."
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Re: Wo Tera Naam Tha
Nice Poetry YAJComment
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Re: Wo Tera Naam Tha
ummmmm
nice gazal + compose but urdu mistakes hain kuj jaghon par
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