~*~Ghalib Ghazal~*~

[cute_charming786]

[*Rida*]

Re: ~*~Ghalib Ghazal~*~

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
mujhay pooori image nazar nahin aarahi hai ....lakin jitni bhi nazar aai hai.... buht khobsorat composing hai ......:clap:...
kalam bhi acha hai ..lakin urdu ki kuch mistakes hain..... jaisay nadan mein ...aur hangama mein ...hamzah nahin aye ga...:)

[Masood]

Re: ~*~Ghalib Ghazal~*~

Zabardast designing to tawaqoh key mutabiq hi hai magar!!!

Dil key neechey zer aani chahiye, Nadaan key baad Hamzah kya kar rahi hai?

Hangama key baad mein awari si hamza kya kar rahi hai?

Jahan tak mujhey yaad parrta hai misraa kuchh yun hai:

ghamzah-o-ashwaa YEH ada kya hai.

Otherwise - excellent work.

Siraf ik kaam kijiye keh apni file Pegham per hi uploade kijiye is tarha dowloading mein kam waqt lagey ga - aap Pegham Gallery mein bhi upload kar key link yahan paste kar sakti hain :)

[MuQadas]

Re: ~*~Ghalib Ghazal~*~

v niceee zabar10

[Wafa]

Re: ~*~Ghalib Ghazal~*~

mughe pic nazar nahi aa rahe......:(

[cute_charming786]

Re: ~*~Ghalib Ghazal~*~

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
mujhay pooori image nazar nahin aarahi hai ....lakin jitni bhi nazar aai hai.... buht khobsorat composing hai ......:clap:...
kalam bhi acha hai ..lakin urdu ki kuch mistakes hain..... jaisay nadan mein ...aur hangama mein ...hamzah nahin aye ga...:)

Shukrai Rida baji
aap ka bohat bohat shukria
galtian iss liye hain k ye mujhe kissi dost ne di hia
aur inpage file send ki thi
aur jaisay mujhe mile main ne waisay hi iss ko coposed kar dia
bas mere galti itni hia k main ne parha nahin gooooooor se
ainda ehtiat karoon gai

[cute_charming786]

Re: ~*~Ghalib Ghazal~*~

Zabardast designing to tawaqoh key mutabiq hi hai magar!!!

Dil key neechey zer aani chahiye, Nadaan key baad Hamzah kya kar rahi hai?

Hangama key baad mein awari si hamza kya kar rahi hai?

Jahan tak mujhey yaad parrta hai misraa kuchh yun hai:

ghamzah-o-ashwaa YEH ada kya hai.

Otherwise - excellent work.

Siraf ik kaam kijiye keh apni file Pegham per hi uploade kijiye is tarha dowloading mein kam waqt lagey ga - aap Pegham Gallery mein bhi upload kar key link yahan paste kar sakti hain :)

Massood bahi shukria
aap ka bohat bohat
galtina wali resaon to main ne uper bata di hai
aur ye uplaod wali ainda ehtaiat karooooon gi
bohat shukrai
bas aap aik kaaam kar dain gallary main dosre logon ki tarah mera bhi
account bana dain take main apne account main pics upload kar sakoon

[cute_charming786]

Re: ~*~Ghalib Ghazal~*~

mughe pic nazar nahi aa rahe......:(

aab main kia karoooon batain
????????????/
dua kar sakti hooooon sirf

[Wafa]

Re: ~*~Ghalib Ghazal~*~

aab main kia karoooon batain
????????????/
dua kar sakti hooooon sirf

pic ko pegham par upload karo....pher yaha dekhao to me bhi dekh lo ge.........:wk

[shakeeel]

Re: ~*~Ghalib Ghazal~*~

aap ne she'r section mein bhi is ghazal ka she'r post kiya tha, tab mein ne poori ghazal aap ke liye post ki thi, yahan dobara kar raha hun.