aap ki raye darkar hai....?????

[shakeeel]

agar yeh ghazal kisi ne kahin parhi ho to plz mujh ko bata den k is mein koi ghalti to nahin hai, aur agar aap ko pata ho k kis ki hai to bata den please.

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: aap ki raye darkar hai....?????

sory bhai main nahi janta

[MuQadas]

Re: aap ki raye darkar hai....?????

shayed parhi hoi lagte hai

[*Rida*]

Re: aap ki raye darkar hai....?????

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
buht umda ghazal hai ....buht khooob............

[Madiha kanwal]

Re: aap ki raye darkar hai....?????

Na Dekhain Gain Kabhi Dil Pay Lagay Zakhm Unhain
Dard Uthay Ga Magar Dil Ko Daba Rakhain Gain
Sab Hata Daingain Teri Raah Ki Rukawat Hamdam
Ghar K Darwazay Ko Har Waqt Khula Rakhain Gain
Toot Bhi Jay Gi Umeed Jo Terey Aanay Ki
Ek Diya Phir Bhi Hawaaon Main Jala Rakhain Gain

Poet ka naam nahi pata ....

[shakeeel]

Re: aap ki raye darkar hai....?????

Na Dekhain Gain Kabhi Dil Pay Lagay Zakhm Unhain
Dard Uthay Ga Magar Dil Ko Daba Rakhain Gain
Sab Hata Daingain Teri Raah Ki Rukawat Hamdam
Ghar K Darwazay Ko Har Waqt Khula Rakhain Gain
Toot Bhi Jay Gi Umeed Jo Terey Aanay Ki
Ek Diya Phir Bhi Hawaaon Main Jala Rakhain Gain

Poet ka naam nahi pata ....

Thanks a million madiha

[DIL]

Re: aap ki raye darkar hai....?????

Main aj pehli baar paher rahi hoon is liye batanay say qasir hoon kay kis shayar ki hai :)..........waisay ghazal b achi hai aur app ka kaam b :rose

BTW just curious kay app border work q nahi kertay? ziada ter sada images hi hotey hian. Aisa nahi kay aisay acha nahi lagta lekin border will give a more neat look to the image. what say? (I hope u won't mind my comeents :) )

[shakeeel]

Re: aap ki raye darkar hai....?????

Main aj pehli baar paher rahi hoon is liye batanay say qasir hoon kay kis shayar ki hai :)..........waisay ghazal b achi hai aur app ka kaam b :rose

BTW just curious kay app border work q nahi kertay? ziada ter sada images hi hotey hian. Aisa nahi kay aisay acha nahi lagta lekin border will give a more neat look to the image. what say? (I hope u won't mind my comeents :) )

thanks DIL, aap ne theek kaha , mein jahan adjust ho sakey border zaroor use karta hun, yeh wali nazam to wese hi aarzi post ki thi, k mein sure nahin tha k yeh theek hai. ab is ki islah ho gai hai to is ko theek tarah se compose karun ga.

[DIL]

Re: aap ki raye darkar hai....?????

thanks DIL, aap ne theek kaha , mein jahan adjust ho sakey border zaroor use karta hun, yeh wali nazam to wese hi aarzi post ki thi, k mein sure nahin tha k yeh theek hai. ab is ki islah ho gai hai to is ko theek tarah se compose karun ga.

Chaliyea phir hum intezar karen gaye is ghazal ki khubsurat composing ki :rose