Ek Khawab Hai !!!!

[Hamsafar]

:rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose :rose
Here Is My effort

[MuQadas]

Re: Ek Khawab Hai !!!!

yeh to kai khawab hogay

[Hamsafar]

Re: Ek Khawab Hai !!!!

jee main aap k reply k maqsad nahin samjha
plz clear it

[MuQadas]

Re: Ek Khawab Hai !!!!

matlab yeh to kafe saray khwab ho gay

[Hamsafar]

Re: Ek Khawab Hai !!!!

ok
samjh gaya main
sorry aap ko takleeeeef di main ne :rose
kush rahain,.....................

[Wafa]

Re: Ek Khawab Hai !!!!

bohot he ache ghazal likhe hai hamsafar........:clap: :clap:
aur aap ne designing bhi bohot he zabardast......:thmbup:

[khananiz]

Re: Ek Khawab Hai !!!!

buhat hee khoob.......:clap:

[Hamsafar]

Re: Ek Khawab Hai !!!!

Sukria Wafa And Kan

[*Rida*]

Re: Ek Khawab Hai !!!!

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

wah....buht khooob..
buht khobsorat composing ki hai

[shakeeel]

Re: Ek Khawab Hai !!!!

Designing to aap ki achi hai lekin yeh ghazal kuch be-wazan si hai, aap ne mehsoos kiya ? kis ki hai yeh?

[Hamsafar]

Re: Ek Khawab Hai !!!!

Salaam Shkkeeeeeel bahi
bacha hoooooon abhi
maff kar dia karoooooooooo
sukria passand karne ka

[maha]

Re: Ek Khawab Hai !!!!

bohat hi zaberdast ghazal hai

[Hamsafar]

Re: Ek Khawab Hai !!!!

Thanks Maha jeeeeeeeee..........................thank......... :rose

[ranafarooq]

Re: Ek Khawab Hai !!!!


aslam o-alikam ghazal be wazan hay koi wazn nhi hay is me lafzoom kee tarteeb thik nhi hay kawish achi hay laikn....................

[MuQadas]

Re: Ek Khawab Hai !!!!

v nice