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Koi Shakhs Tha........
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bohat khub.....gud work....par pehle misre me grh barh hai....
wo gaya to sath hi le gaya sabhi rang utar ke shehr ka...
chk kijyega..:)
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aap ne theek kaha, mein is ghazal ko dhoond raha hun, complete nahin mil rahi.Originally posted by Karb View Post
2 she'r missing hain.
1......kaii khushboein darr-e-dost tuk mere saath shama-badast raheen
2......ye jo mein ne tazah ghazal kahii, su hai nazR ahl-e-firaaQ ki
agar aap ke pass complete ho to mujh ko bhej den.
aap ka bohat bohat shukria.
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Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
one again....beautiful composition...:clap:
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Very Beautiful n Nice
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nice one.......:thmbup:
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Adaab!!!
Ahan beautiful sharing :rosesigpicComment
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bohot hi ache designing aur ghazal bhi....:)sigpic
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Fine Art
Thanks yar
kuch kehne ki zarooooooorat nahinHar-Fun-MoulaComment
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nice composing bhai:rose
ager apko ye ghazal nahi mili tu kia mein send ker don?Last edited by Madiha kanwal; 6 September 2006, 21:05.
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Re: Koi Shakhs Tha........
chalo koi der tu..
kaii khushboyein dar e dost tak merey sath shama e badast thin
mujhe pochna na para pata , merey gul azaar k sheher ka
ye jo mein ne taza ghazal kahi , so hai nazer ahl e firaq ki
k na mil saka koi nama ber mujhe merey yaar k sheher ka
so mata'a e jan ko liye huye , palat aye tery girifta dil
kisey bechtey k mila nahi koi eitbar k sheher ka
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Re: Koi Shakhs Tha........
Aap ka bohat bohat shukria, mein jald hi is ko mukammal kar dun gaOriginally posted by Madiha kanwal View Post
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