~*~ Dosto ~*~

[Masood]

Ahmed Faraz ki aik ghazal pesh hai..

[jugnoo217]

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ok dost, ap ne kaha tu maan lete hain :)

good work :)

[fari]

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Masood bhai ya jo pic ma bhai sahab hain kafi khoofnaak nahi lag rahay :ahhh:
per App ki composing aur Gazal ka intakhab perfect ha

[Masood]

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ok dost, ap ne kaha tu maan lete hain :)

good work :)

thanks Nadeem - ghaltiyaan door kertey rahiye ...

[Masood]

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Masood bhai ya jo pic ma bhai sahab hain kafi khoofnaak nahi lag rahay :ahhh:
per App ki composing aur Gazal ka intakhab perfect ha

Haan ji khofnak to hai magar guilty feel kar raha hai shayid :donno: ...

[fari]

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Haan ji khofnak to hai magar guilty feel kar raha hai shayid :donno: ...

Nahi woh guilty kam lag raha ha .....aur Villan zyada lag raha ha:shh:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

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Adaab!!!!
ahan bohat umdah composing ki hai:rose :rose , lekin fari sahee keh rahee hain k background mein mojud sahab jis terha se aankhein ghumaeybaythay khasssay khaufnaak lag rahay hain :cc:

[Wafa]

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very nice composing aur ghazal to bohot hi ache select ki hai.....:thmbup:

[ASAD]

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very nice

['SamRazi']

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very nice masood :rose

[*Rida*]

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Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

poetry buht achi hai

[Masood]

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Adaab!!!!
ahan bohat umdah composing ki hai , lekin fari sahee keh rahee hain k background mein mojud sahab jis terha se aankhein ghumaeybaythay khasssay khaufnaak lag rahay hain

:) woh merey jaisa hai na :p - thnks

very nice composing aur ghazal to bohot hi ache select ki hai.....

thnks wafa

very nice

thanku teddy bear

very nice masood

thanks saima

[shakeeel]

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bohat umda masood bhai........
mere khayal mein second last line mein lafz" to " izafi hai.