~ Aa Bhe Jaao ~

[aik_lerki]

:rose

[Aania]

Re: ~ Aa Bhe Jaao ~

good work komi ... keep it up

[shakeeel]

Re: ~ Aa Bhe Jaao ~

bohat achi ghazal hai......and nice composing
(last she'r par ghor kijiye, sari ghazal ki munasbat se is she'r ka wazan gar bar nahin ho gaya? yeh is tarah nahin hona chahiye"un ko phir se dohrane ik bar aa bhi jao" ???????

[*Rida*]

Re: ~ Aa Bhe Jaao ~

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

buht zabardast

komal tum nay mujhay dobara PM hi nahin kiyaa ... kia maira PM nahin milaaa:hhh:

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~ Aa Bhe Jaao ~

good work komi ... keep it up

Thankx Aaano :eye:

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~ Aa Bhe Jaao ~

bohat achi ghazal hai......and nice composing
(last she'r par ghor kijiye, sari ghazal ki munasbat se is she'r ka wazan gar bar nahin ho gaya? yeh is tarah nahin hona chahiye"un ko phir se dohrane ik bar aa bhi jao" ???????

Thankx Shakeel :eye:

Umm i think so jesa ap keh rahy hain wesa he hoga ..
vo actually mai ny ye gazal ek dafa sune the..than bad mai jab likha to is shair ma mujhy thore confusion ho rahe the..:embarasse
so mistake ho gae hoge:(

[aik_lerki]

Re: ~ Aa Bhe Jaao ~

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

buht zabardast

komal tum nay mujhay dobara PM hi nahin kiyaa ... kia maira PM nahin milaaa:hhh:

Thankx Rida :eye:

nahe na mai ny us din ge reply ker diya tha tumko .. but i did'nt get ur
reply :embarasse mai yahe soch rahe the ky tumny reply kio nahe kera ..