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Asslamo Alikum :salam:
Apni aik ghazal pesh hay :)
Apni aik ghazal pesh hay :)
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Re: Sar-e-Rah us ne Mujhey..!!
nice...
last sh'r main merey hisab se imla ki ghalti hai :cc:
"usey "DEKHO" (merey khyal se ye word "DEKHOON" hai ) to aiesye lagta hai mujhey Yaaram ...
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nicely... composed...
aik aur ghalti nikaaloon :cc: :bhago:
wo jo frame ki cutting ki hai naa /? :cc: us ko nechey aur ooper se balance nahen kiaa :cc: bottom se thick hai top se thin... :cc:
frame hata do to ziada nice.. neat n clean lagey gi... :)
bura na manayo aadi ji.. ham aiesey hi hain :D
nice try dude...
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Re: Sar-e-Rah us ne Mujhey..!!
thanx :) shukrya islah karne ka :)Allah
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aslaam_u_alikam
yaaram saahib bohat khub gazal kahi hey aap ney
sabhi ashaar bohat pasnd aaye
daad qabool kijiye
shukriyaComment
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Re: Sar-e-Rah us ne Mujhey..!!
Fatimah jee pasand karne ka shukrya :)Allah
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Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
v niceeeeeeeComment
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BeautiFull :rose
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Shukrya Larki :roseAllah
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HMMMMMM.......... NICE...........
CHIPKOOOOOOOOOOOO
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Re: Sar-e-Rah us ne Mujhey..!!
Thanx rehan :)Allah
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Bohat khoobusurat :)tumharey bas mein agar ho to bhool jao mujheytumhein bhulaney mein shayid mujhey zamana lageyComment
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Re: Sar-e-Rah us ne Mujhey..!!
nice poetry and very nice composing
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bohat achi composing ki he ap ne yaaramComment
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Wah bhoat umda poetry aur composing.....
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Re: Sar-e-Rah us ne Mujhey..!!
Aap sab ki pazeerayi ka bohat shukrya :)Allah
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