Tum Apnay Dukh Per ....

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Assalam_O_Alikum WR WB

Aik aur Kosish ki hay ... is baar takreeban sab bato ka khyal rakha hay .. Umeed hay kay mazeed bahtree kay liya madad farmay gy

FeaamnAllah

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Tum Apnay Dukh Per ....

hmm bohat umdah ....sh'r bhi zabardast hai
lekin BP ji sara black kion hain
contrast use kiya karein bohat zabardast lagay ga phir
aur aap nay word tumharay mein 2 baar hay use kiya hai
haathi walay hay bhi aur do chashmi hay bhi

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Re: Tum Apnay Dukh Per ....

better hai :thmbup:
lafaz "tumharay" ko theek kar daian ....
or image black hai to font thora bright kar daian :thmbup:

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Tum Apnay Dukh Per ....

hmm bohat umdah ....sh'r bhi zabardast hai
lekin BP ji sara black kion hain
contrast use kiya karein bohat zabardast lagay ga phir
aur aap nay word tumharay mein 2 baar hay use kiya hai
haathi walay hay bhi aur do chashmi hay bhi

Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

Ab u sab khud soch lo kay me Bord main kasy pass ho ta ho ga :khi:

AB to ya save nahi hay but next time aur bhi Care karu ga .. :D

FeaamnAllah :lpop::lpop:

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Tum Apnay Dukh Per ....

better hai :thmbup:
lafaz "tumharay" ko theek kar daian ....
or image black hai to font thora bright kar daian :thmbup:

Assalam_O_Alikum WR WB

Ok Aanchal but save nahi kya na .. INSHAllah Care karu ga aur bhi next time

FeaamnAllah :lpop::lpop:

[shakeeel]

Re: Tum Apnay Dukh Per ....

achi koshish hai, jari rakhiye, improve ho raha hai aap ka kam....
ghalti to mension ho hi chuki hai............

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

Re: Tum Apnay Dukh Per ....

Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

Ab u sab khud soch lo kay me Bord main kasy pass ho ta ho ga :khi:

AB to ya save nahi hay but next time aur bhi Care karu ga .. :D

FeaamnAllah :lpop::lpop:

WaAlaikum Assalam ,
ji maloom ho gaya U nay mithhaey k dabbay de de k board ka exam pass kiya hai:khi:
Wesay day by Day U ka kaam achha hota ja raha hai
U to serious hee ho gaey compsing k lieey:lol

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Tum Apnay Dukh Per ....

WaAlaikum Assalam ,
ji maloom ho gaya U nay mithhaey k dabbay de de k board ka exam pass kiya hai:khi:
Wesay day by Day U ka kaam achha hota ja raha hai
U to serious hee ho gaey compsing k lieey:lol

Assalam_O_Alikum WR WB

Khuda ka wasta hay .... Izzat ki dhajiya na urhow :tauba

Sindh University ki koi to izzat rahnay do :tauba

Sssssssssshhhhhh kisi ko khanay maat:P

FEamanAllah :lpop::lpop:

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Tum Apnay Dukh Per ....

achi koshish hai, jari rakhiye, improve ho raha hai aap ka kam....
ghalti to mension ho hi chuki hai............

Assalam_O_Alikum WR WB

Bhot shukriya shakeel
Srahnay ka aur help karnay ka

FeaamnAllah :lpop::lpop:

['SamRazi']

Re: Tum Apnay Dukh Per ....

as every one said, U 've improved :thmbup: ........ keep on :rose

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Tum Apnay Dukh Per ....

as every one said, U 've improved :thmbup: ........ keep on :rose

Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

bass aap saath rahya ... hum likhaty rahy gy

Kitan zalim Dialoge mara hay na :D

FeamanAllah :lpop::lpop:

[Nav]

Re: Tum Apnay Dukh Per ....

Bhoat umda sher.......very nice

[*Rida*]

Re: Tum Apnay Dukh Per ....

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

buht zabardast, buht khoobsorat shair hai ... :)..aur haqeeqat hai....
lakin font narrow hai

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Tum Apnay Dukh Per ....

Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose

buht zabardast, buht khoobsorat shair hai ... :)..aur haqeeqat hai....
lakin font narrow hai

Assalam_O_Alikum WR WB

Main haqeeqat hi likhta hu aur khatra hu bass samjhany waly ki baat hay koi mazak main taal deyta hay to koi kucha ur samjh kar

FeaamnAllah

[khan khan]

Re: Tum Apnay Dukh Per ....

Khoob.