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Aik Shaks kay naam !
FeaamnAllah
Aik Shaks kay naam !
FeaamnAllah
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Meri Taqdeer Main Likha Tha Khuda Ny Aik Din
Tu Jisay Cha-hyga Wo Shaks Paraya Ho Ga
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Re: Ujalay apni yaado kay ..
Assalam_O_Alaikum,
woow bohat khoob ...nice sh'r n composing:thmbup: :thmbup:
Ye u to wakaeey compsing karnay lagay.....
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Re: Ujalay apni yaado kay ..
Originally posted by Eshaa_wellwisher
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Yaqeen nahi aarha hay na ! me ko bhi yaqeen nahi hy :D
10 times likhta hu phir post karta hu :khi:
Bass us ky Ghum ka thofa hay .. jo ab nikhar kars many aarha hay :kr:
FeaamNAllah :lpop::lpop:Meri Taqdeer Main Likha Tha Khuda Ny Aik Din
Tu Jisay Cha-hyga Wo Shaks Paraya Ho Ga
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Re: Ujalay apni yaado kay ..
Assalaam-0-Alaikom:rose
composing achi hai ...image bhi achi hai...:)
lakin yeh zindgee main aliff aur ho jai main comma kia kar raha hai ..
aap pehlay urdu check kar wa lia karain :khi:Comment
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Re: Ujalay apni yaado kay ..
Originally posted by Rida
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Pata hy Rida .. kya ho ta hay itnays hair dkehta hu to asan wala likhta hu
aaj mujhy Chiya nahi likhna aarha tha ... khdu bhi paper main nahi likh pata hu ...
Aur dekhow to kis ko .. mera aagy pecahy koi nahi hay ...
jo karna hay khud karna hay :D
Khudi maina sa ho jata hay
aur thx tum nay itni slow service main mujhy smajhya
FeaamNAllah :lpop::lpop:Meri Taqdeer Main Likha Tha Khuda Ny Aik Din
Tu Jisay Cha-hyga Wo Shaks Paraya Ho Ga
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Re: Ujalay apni yaado kay ..
Assalaam-0-Aliakom:rose
acha theek hai hum aap ki urdu ki ghaltiyan ignore kar daitay hain
Khudi maina sa ho jata hay
yeh kia likha hai
aur
yeh slow service wali kia baat hai bhiiiComment
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Re: Ujalay apni yaado kay ..
your work is improving BP.....bas urdu mein ghaltiyan ho rahi hain....keep it up
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Re: Ujalay apni yaado kay ..
one of my favourite shair :thmbup:
baki sab theek hai bas apni zindaaaaaagi theek kar daian :lolComment
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Re: Ujalay apni yaado kay ..
salam...Originally posted by Bheegi-Palkain
BP jaaye main ye ke ooper hamza hoti hai
zindaagi nahen hota.... us main se "alif" erase karen...
Rest is awesome .... khush rahye... :rose
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Re: Ujalay apni yaado kay ..
Asslam_O_Alikum WR WBOriginally posted by Aania
Bhot shukriya Aania INSHALAH kosish kar rha hu sahi ho ga
bass tum isi trha parhti raho aur me ko sikhaty raho
FeaamNAllahMeri Taqdeer Main Likha Tha Khuda Ny Aik Din
Tu Jisay Cha-hyga Wo Shaks Paraya Ho Ga
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