Wo Is Kamal Sey ..

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Wo Is Kamal Sey ..

Nice BP - do batein kehna chahoon ga - shair ko FULL JUSTIFY rakha karein achha lagta hai aur doosra shair key aakhir mein fullstop nahin daaltey :hammer

Assalm_O_Alikum WR WB

Bhot hi shukriya masood ... per FULL justify say kya murad ?

aur aaynda nahi daly ga nuktay :)

FeaamnAllah

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Wo Is Kamal Sey ..

khelta main "yeh" kay nuqtay kah gay :p

Asslam_O_AlikuM WR WB

Washroom gay thay :D aay nahi to socha asy hi likh du :khi:

FeaamnAllah thx for mistake Aanchal :rose

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Wo Is Kamal Sey ..

kosahish to aap ny achi ki hy likin aap ny is fail mazi ka istimaal theek naheen kiya par kar uon mehsoos hata hy k ya waqea bar bar hua hy yani aap ny mzi istimrari ka istimal kiya agar aap is ko simpel mazi main rehny dety to ziyada mosar tha jaysy....

wo is kamal se khila tha ishaq ki bazi

main apni fatah samjha tha maat hony tak
mery khiyal main ab aapki baat main wazan ziyada hogaya hy...:phool:

Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

Yaar ab itna nahi pta per aagy care karu ga :lpop:

FeaamnAllah :lpop::lpop:

[ujala]

Re: Wo Is Kamal Sey ..

beautiful

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Re: Wo Is Kamal Sey ..

beautiful

Asslam_O_Alikum WR WB

Thx Ujala :rose

FeaamnAllah