Na-Khush-O-Bezar-Hoon

[Aania]

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[shakeeel]

Re: Na-Khush-O-Bezar-Hoon

Salam......its really nice, image , colour combination, and text..all perfect.
this is a beutifull composing.:rose

[ADNAN.S]

Re: Na-Khush-O-Bezar-Hoon

salaam aania g......bohat umdha.......par mere kheyaal se aap ne eik ghalti ki hai.....aap ne " mitti " likha hai mere kheyaal se " matti " hota hai....

[Aania]

Re: Na-Khush-O-Bezar-Hoon

thnx all of u ...
@ alone .... i didnt do inpage of it...
@jhumroo.... thnx u so much... my cocern in to bring good work of poetry... specially of Sir Iqbal if i can get them in inpage...

[Aania]

Re: Na-Khush-O-Bezar-Hoon

Salam......its really nice, image , colour combination, and text..all perfect.
this is a beutifull composing.:rose

thnx u so much to appreciate... :rose

[Withoutsoul]

Re: Na-Khush-O-Bezar-Hoon


HMMMMM NICE.....

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: Na-Khush-O-Bezar-Hoon

Mera apna view he...ager text ka colour change ker diya jaye, doono lines ki inter-space kum ki jaye aur doonon lines ko bottom mein lagaya jaaye to ziada acha lagay ga...lekin zaroori nahi jo mujay acha lagta he wo kisi aur ko bhi acha lagay...waise nice he.

['SamRazi']

Re: Na-Khush-O-Bezar-Hoon

the color combination, font color every thing is superb :thmbup:

magar shair ke hisab se ager real sang-e-marmar ka koi background hota to zada behter hota :) .. aur Poet ka naam "Allam Iqbal" shair ke end mei hona chahiyeh tha na :p