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  • #1

    ~Deepak Raag~

    asslamoalikum
    looking for ur critical appriciation :ANYWORD8

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    شاہ حسین جیہناں سچ پچھاتا' کامل عِشق تیہناں دا جاتا
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  • #2
    Re: ~Deepak Raag~

    Waj ji wah keya kehnay.........Zabardast.....!!!
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    • #3
      Re: ~Deepak Raag~

      waqai chacha ji ?
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      شاہ حسین جیہناں سچ پچھاتا' کامل عِشق تیہناں دا جاتا

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      • #4
        Re: ~Deepak Raag~

        image acha banaya hai aap ne
        mere khayal mein is sher ke end mein "Gay" ki jagha "isay" aata hai ?


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        • #5
          Re: ~Deepak Raag~

          w.salam
          hmmm!! buht acha ja raha hai ... buht khubsurat banaya hai
          u can't gain RESPECT by choice nor by requesting it... it is earned through your words & actions."

          :pr:

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          • #6
            Re: ~Deepak Raag~

            Originally posted by saraah View Post
            waqai chacha ji ?
            ji janab wakei ......... :)
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            • #7
              Re: ~Deepak Raag~

              Sher mein kuch kami nahi kiya ??saarah ??

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              • #8
                Re: ~Deepak Raag~

                Deepak raag hai chahat apni ..kahay sunaaein Tumhein
                hum tu sulghtay hein rehtay hein , kion sulgaahein tumhein

                i think sher kuch yun hai !
                Last edited by Gul; 11 May 2009, 07:08. Reason: Resized

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                • #9
                  Re: ~Deepak Raag~

                  nicee one... sab say acha brush lag raha hai... baqi sab bhi acha lag raha hai :em:
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                  وَ بَارِکْ لِيْ فِيْمَا أَعْطَيْتَ

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                  • #10
                    Re: ~Deepak Raag~

                    Fantastic!

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                    • #11
                      Re: ~Deepak Raag~

                      Originally posted by shakeeel View Post
                      image acha banaya hai aap ne
                      mere khayal mein is sher ke end mein "Gay" ki jagha "isay" aata hai ?
                      Originally posted by Gul View Post
                      Sher mein kuch kami nahi kiya ??saarah ??
                      Originally posted by Gul View Post
                      Deepak raag hai chahat apni ..kahay sunaaein Tumhein
                      hum tu sulghtay hein rehtay hein , kion sulgaahein tumhein

                      i think sher kuch yun hai !
                      aap yeh suniye

                      Originally posted by *Hala* View Post
                      w.salam
                      hmmm!! buht acha ja raha hai ... buht khubsurat banaya hai
                      Originally posted by Mirza Ghalib View Post
                      ji janab wakei ......... :)

                      Originally posted by *Rida* View Post
                      nicee one... sab say acha brush lag raha hai... baqi sab bhi acha lag raha hai :em:
                      Originally posted by VBQ2 View Post
                      Fantastic!
                      boooooooooooooooohat shukria :ANYWORD8:ANYWORD8:ANYWORD8
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                      شاہ حسین جیہناں سچ پچھاتا' کامل عِشق تیہناں دا جاتا

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                      • #12
                        Re: ~Deepak Raag~

                        Originally posted by saraah View Post
                        aap yeh suniye
                        Originally posted by Gul View Post
                        Deepak raag hai chahat apni ..kahay sunaaein Tumhein

                        hum tu sulghtay hein rehtay hein , kion sulgaahein tumhein



                        i think sher kuch yun hai !

                        Saraah yeh aik bohat khoobsurat ghazal hai, aur iska aik aik shair bohat dilfareb hai - agar kisi ney issey ulta kiya hai to woh banwati type ka shair ho ga - asal matan ghazal ka yeh hai:


                        deepak raag hai chahat apni, kahey sunaein tumhein
                        ham to sulaghtey hi rehtey hain kyun sulghaein tumhein

                        tark-e-muhabbat tark-e-tamana kar chukney key baad
                        ham peh yeh mushkil aan parri hai, kaisey bhulaein tumein

                        sanata jab tanhaii key zehar mein gujta hai
                        woh gharriyaan kyun'kar kat'ti hain kaisey btaein tumhein

                        jin baton ney pyar tumhara nafrat mein badla
                        dar lagta hai woh batein bhi bhool na jaein tumhein
                        Last edited by Admin; 11 May 2009, 17:02.
                        مجھے تلاش نہ کر ذوقِ بیخودی سجود
                        نظر کی چند شعاعوں میں گھر گیا ہوں میں

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                        • #13
                          Re: ~Deepak Raag~

                          Originally posted by saraah View Post
                          aap yeh suniye









                          Originally posted by Admin View Post
                          Saraah yeh aik bohat khoobsurat ghazal hai, aur iska aik aik shair bohat dilfareb hai - agar kisi ney issey ulta kiya hai to woh banwati type ka shair ho ga - asal matan ghazal ka yeh hai:


                          deepak raag hai chahat apni, kahey sunaein tumhein
                          ham to sulaghtey hi rehtey hain kyun sulghaein tumhein

                          tark-e-muhabbat tark-e-tamana kar chukney key baad
                          ham peh yeh mushkil aan parri hai, kaisey bulaein tumein

                          sanata jab tanhaii key zehar mein gujta hai
                          woh gharriyat kyun'kar kat'ti hain kaisey btaein tumhein

                          jin baton ney pyar tumhara nafrat mein badla

                          dar lagta hai woh batein bhi bhool na jaein tumhein
                          oh my GOD 372-scare
                          sir ji u r right me ne ab dobara suni gazal.... aur ghor krnay par pata chala k yeh ''tumein'' hi hai

                          shorry :embarasse
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                          شاہ حسین جیہناں سچ پچھاتا' کامل عِشق تیہناں دا جاتا

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                          • #14
                            Re: ~Deepak Raag~

                            wawawa
                            I aM Not a complete Idiot......Some parts are Missing........

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