Mohabat Na Hoyi

[Mirza Ghalib]

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[jam1]

Re: Mohabat Na Hoyi

nice one.............!

[TANVEER-AHMAD]

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very nice yaar.........bohat alaa

[mustang_2008]

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wah wah kya baat he zabardast

[Mirza Ghalib]

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yaaro wesay wesay waah waah na kiye jaya karo.tankeed bhi karo kay mujay apni khaamiyon ka pata chalay

[life.]

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nice...............

[mustang_2008]

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frame bohat achi he text ka shade hota to or bhi acha lgta

[кησωη ѕтяαηgєя]

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text effect need improvement shair is nice

[*Rida*]

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yaaro wesay wesay waah waah na kiye jaya
karo.tankeed bhi karo kay mujay apni khaamiyon ka pata chalay

shair buht acha hai..... aur frame bhi acha hai....... aap kay kaam mein improvement thori late aa rahi hai... warna aap buht achay designer lagtay hain ......shayed pehlay bhi kaha tha keh frame aur text mein kuch fasla rakha karain.....kisi bhi cheez ki khobsorti us mein paaye janay walay taqazun ki marhoon e mnnat hoti hai ....... umeed hai aap suggestion per amal karain gay.....

[Mirza Ghalib]

Re: Mohabat Na Hoyi

ab hoyi na baat... criticism mujay bata raha hai kay main nay kahan kahan ghalti ki hai.thanks for that.

[Sky angel]

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buhat khub

[Silent Tears Sajid]

Re: Mohabat Na Hoyi

Zabardast Sher Hai Really Nice

[talib e dua]

Re: Mohabat Na Hoyi

wah g wah kya bat he