nasha

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outstanding sher by faraz.................



EDIT BY ADMIN:

Shair ghalt shaair sey mansoob honey ki bina per delete kiya jata hai

[shakeeel]

Re: nasha

mujh ko yeh sher "faraz" ka nahin lagta, plz har sher ko faraz ke naam mansoob matt kijiye

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Re: nasha

pa ji faraz ka hai..............agar kahen to refernce de doon......pyarey bhai abhi to mein ne or bhi faraz k sher design kar k upload karne hain.....:D:

[shakeeel]

Re: nasha

pa ji faraz ka hai..............agar kahen to refernce de doon......pyarey bhai abhi to mein ne or bhi faraz k sher design kar k upload karne hain.....:D:

jee aap reference dijiye, hum bhi to dekhien?

[*Hala*]

Re: nasha

nice work...........

[Admin]

Re: nasha

Yeh shair Faraz ka nahin hai!

Aap key paas aik week hai, aik week mein saboot pesh kijiyey keh Faraz ki kis kitab mein yeh shair likha huwa. Aik week baad is thread ko remove kar diya jaey ga.

[TANVEER-AHMAD]

Re: nasha

shaira sobia siddiqui......kitab mera intikhab.........page no.21.........agar na ho to aap is thread ko remove karne k haqdar hain

[shakeeel]

Re: nasha

shaira sobia siddiqui......kitab mera intikhab.........page no.21.........agar na ho to aap is thread ko remove karne k haqdar hain

to aap ka matlab hai ke yeh sher "sobia siddiqui" ka hai?

[TANVEER-AHMAD]

Re: nasha

o bijjuuu...........:lahoul lagta hai aap ne kabhi kisi bhi shair ka majmua e kalam nahi parha....................... us ki kitab mera intikhab hai jis mein us ne mukhtalif shairon ke ashaar or ghazlon ko apne majmoe ke sath likha hai............market mein jao or kitab hasil ker k dekh lo

[shakeeel]

Re: nasha

o bijjuuu...........:lahoul lagta hai aap ne kabhi kisi bhi shair ka majmua e kalam nahi parha....................... us ki kitab mera intikhab hai jis mein us ne mukhtalif shairon ke ashaar or ghazlon ko apne majmoe ke sath likha hai............market mein jao or kitab hasil ker k dekh lo

mein ne shayed aap se zayada hi poetry parhi ho gi,

kaya aap ko baat karney ki tameez nahin hai? baat aap poetry ki kar rahe hain lekin aap to "ikhlaq" ki abcd se bhi waqif nahin lagtey.

mind your language next time.

this is FIRST warning

[Admin]

Re: nasha

o bijjuuu...........:lahoul lagta hai aap ne kabhi kisi bhi shair ka majmua e kalam nahi parha....................... us ki kitab mera intikhab hai jis mein us ne mukhtalif shairon ke ashaar or ghazlon ko apne majmoe ke sath likha hai............market mein jao or kitab hasil ker k dekh lo

Insaan ki aqal aur bsarat uski zuban key peechhey hoti hai. Lagta hai keh aap ko kisi ney tehzeeb nahin sikhaii. Jab bhi zuban kholein pehley uska ehtesab kar liya karein keh aap key farmaney jaa rahey hain! Main is qisam ki zuban ko Pegham per bilkul allow nahin kar sakta!

Doosri baat yeh hai keh Pakistan mein taleem ka aur kitabon ka jo meyar hai woh bhi main janta hoon. Merey paas bhi aik kuchh kitabein hain jis mein Faiz ka shair Mohsin Naqvi key naam sey aur Faraz ka shair kisi doosrey key naam sey chhapa geya hai.

Magar meri aur Shakeel bhaii ki shairi key muamley mein itni qabliyat zaroor hai keh ham judge kar sakein keh yeh shair Faraz ka nahin!

Is thread mein post kardah shair delete kiya jaa raha hai. Aaindah agar aap ney Pegham per koi shair design kar key post karna hai to woh drust hona chahiyey - warna your threads will be deleted.