Karab E Aaghahi

[saraah]

ASSLAMLOALIKUM.......
:rose
ITS MY 1ST ATTEMPT........shysmile
.MUJE PEGHAM DESIGNERS AUR PEGHAM MEMBERS JO ACHAA ZOUQ RAKHTAY HAIN....SAB KI TARAF SE TANQEEDI AUR TEHSEENI JAAYEZAY KA INTIZAAR RAHAY GA.........
SHUKRIA

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: Karab E Aaghahi

waalaykum salaam ..arrray waah:thmbup: ...jahan tak design ki baat ha to kaafi achi koshish ki aap nay ,,,,bus thora dim dim lgta ha ..or shair bhi acha laga mujhy ...........overall good work done mamesahab :embarasse

[aabi2cool]

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asslamloalikum.......

:rose
Its My 1st Attempt........shysmile
.muje Pegham Designers Aur Pegham Members Jo Achaa Zouq Rakhtay Hain....sab Ki Taraf Se Tanqeedi Aur Tehseeni Jaayezay Ka Intizaar Rahay Ga.........
Shukria

ڈئزاننگ تو ماہرین ہی بتا سکتے ہیں البتہ میری جانب سے آپ اسے گڈ فرسٹ اٹیمپٹ کہہ سکتی ہیں ۔۔ ۔ خاتون آپ نے ٹھیک ہی نہیں چنی ۔ ۔۔ باقی شعر کہ بارے میں اتنا کہہ سکتا ہوں کہ میری ذاتی رائے میں یہاں کرب آگاہی کہ بجائے کرب آگہی ہوتا تو زیادہ موزوں تھا ۔ ۔۔

[Sanam_khan1]

Re: Karab E Aaghahi

zabardust saraahhhhhhhh

[Gul]

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ASSLAMLOALIKUM.......
:rose
ITS MY 1ST ATTEMPT........shysmile
.MUJE PEGHAM DESIGNERS AUR PEGHAM MEMBERS JO ACHAA ZOUQ RAKHTAY HAIN....SAB KI TARAF SE TANQEEDI AUR TEHSEENI JAAYEZAY KA INTIZAAR RAHAY GA.........
SHUKRIA

Walekum salam ...
Buhat Khoobsoorat hai aap ki yeh koshish
MashaAllah ....!
I know U can Do More Then This
baqi yehi k ...Sher mein wazan ki kuch kami hai ....
wo wahi k ..Abbi Brother k mutabiq ag-ehi
Not agaahi...
:) Bless U my dear and plz keep on sharing ur art work
Looking Forward for more :) inshaAllah

[shakeeel]

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bohat acha design kiya hai aap ne.
jesa k juma sis ne kaha , aap jaldi improve kar lein gi
text par aur mehnat karien.

[*Rida*]

Re: Karab E Aaghahi

walaikom Assalam
buht khobsorat shair hai....... pehlay say correction ho chuki hai.....
aap ko designing aati hai... jari rakhain gi tu expert ho jain gi jald hi.......

[hashambutt]

Re: Karab E Aaghahi

Bohat accha image hai
Mahnat kerti rahien ap

[Mr. Sialkoty]

Re: Karab E Aaghahi

ASSLAMLOALIKUM.......
:rose
ITS MY 1ST ATTEMPT........shysmile
.MUJE PEGHAM DESIGNERS AUR PEGHAM MEMBERS JO ACHAA ZOUQ RAKHTAY HAIN....SAB KI TARAF SE TANQEEDI AUR TEHSEENI JAAYEZAY KA INTIZAAR RAHAY GA.........
SHUKRIA

aap preshaan mut hoon, aap ki attempt superb, fantastic, mind blowing, history he :khi:

[WASI ANJUM]

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bahot achhi koshish hai keep it up

[saraah]

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waalaykum salaam ..arrray waah:thmbup: ...jahan tak design ki baat ha to kaafi achi koshish ki aap nay ,,,,bus thora dim dim lgta ha ..or shair bhi acha laga mujhy ...........overall good work done mamesahab :embarasse

dim lagta hai......thinki.....agr dull shades ki wja s ekeh rahay hain...tou muje "khtay mithay bair".....pasand nae.......LOL
aur shukria.....adaab
thanks 4 ur encouragement.........shysmile

ڈئزاننگ تو ماہرین ہی بتا سکتے ہیں البتہ میری جانب سے آپ اسے گڈ فرسٹ اٹیمپٹ کہہ سکتی ہیں ۔۔ ۔ خاتون آپ نے ٹھیک ہی نہیں چنی ۔ ۔۔ باقی شعر کہ بارے میں اتنا کہہ سکتا ہوں کہ میری ذاتی رائے میں یہاں کرب آگاہی کہ بجائے کرب آگہی ہوتا تو زیادہ موزوں تھا ۔ ۔۔

khatoon tou muje bohat theek lagi....aabi bhai..:embarasse
kesi hoti phir..........???
AUR SHER ESAY HI PARRHA THAA....THEEK KR LU GI AB WESE.....
THANKS ALOT 4 UR CRITICAL APPRICIATION.........:salam:

zabardust saraahhhhhhhh

:rose

Walekum salam ...
Buhat Khoobsoorat hai aap ki yeh koshish
MashaAllah ....!
I know U can Do More Then This
baqi yehi k ...Sher mein wazan ki kuch kami hai ....
wo wahi k ..Abbi Brother k mutabiq ag-ehi
Not agaahi...
:) Bless U my dear and plz keep on sharing ur art work
Looking Forward for more :) inshaAllah

BOHAT BOHAT SHUKRIA......adaab
YANI SHER B SOCH SAMJH K MUNTIKHB KRNA PARRA KRE GA......372-scare
YEAH.....:insha::D:
THANKS ALOT 4 UR CRITICAL APPRICIATION.........:salam:

bohat acha design kiya hai aap ne.
jesa k Huma sis ne kaha , aap jaldi improve kar lein gi
text par aur mehnat karien.

TEXT.....HMMMM.....ISS SE KYA MURAAD.......???
BOHAT SHUKRIA.........adaab

walaikom Assalam
buht khobsorat shair hai....... pehlay say correction ho chuki hai.....
aap ko designing aati hai... jari rakhain gi tu expert ho jain gi jald hi.......

THANKOOOOOOOshysmile

Bohat accha image hai
Mahnat kerti rahien ap

THANKSSS.....:)

aap preshaan mut hoon, aap ki attempt superb, fantastic, mind blowing, history he :khi:

:embarasse

bahot achhi koshish hai keep it up

THANKS.....:)

[*Hala*]

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w.salam
hmmm... baroo ni apni rayee sy apko agaa kia hai..
so ur work is good keep it up dear

[saraah]

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w.salam
hmmm... baroo ni apni rayee sy apko agaa kia hai..
so ur work is good keep it up dear

:)

[fari]

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372-shockap ki pehli kosish bohat achi ha teddyab tu ap ki mazed dekhnay ko milni chaiyan:lpop: