Baar-e-Hastee!!

[AbgeenA]

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

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achi poetry share ki ha aap nay...:D
keep sharing ..:D

[saraah]

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rita darling.....poetry hum ko boaht pasand aya.......

[great_pisces]

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nice sharing

[AbgeenA]

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achi poetry share ki ha aap nay...:D
keep sharing ..:D

shukria janab:D:D

[AbgeenA]

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rita darling.....poetry hum ko boaht pasand aya.......

shukar he apko pasand aya:embarassethankooo:D:

[Eshaa Chaudhry]

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cool sharing rita dearooo:eye:


lekin aap frames n borders k different styles try kijiey na

[AbgeenA]

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nice sharing

thanxx

[saraah]

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shukar he apko pasand aya:embarassethankooo:D:

aray ye kya..........aray jan hm tanqeed b kren tou bhlay k liye krrtay han....kiyon tareef tou sabhi krtay hai na..........bt tanqeed(islaah k liye..)koi koi krta hai na:rose

[AbgeenA]

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aray ye kya..........aray jan hm tanqeed b kren tou bhlay k liye krrtay han....kiyon tareef tou sabhi krtay hai na..........bt tanqeed(islaah k liye..)koi koi krta hai na:rose

u r right sarah ji tanqeed na ho to seekhna mushkil ho jata he me kabhi bhi tankeed ka bura nahi manti or ap ne yahan takeed ki bhi nahi..bas apne "hum ko pasand aya" likha to mujhe mazak sooojh gya to esa likh dia:D:

[saraah]

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u r right sarah ji tanqeed na ho to seekhna mushkil ho jata he me kabhi bhi tankeed ka bura nahi manti or ap ne yahan takeed ki bhi nahi..bas apne "hum ko pasand aya" likha to mujhe mazak sooojh gya to esa likh dia:D:

hmm achaa ..nae wo esa thaa k me ne jo yahan pe designings dekhin....tareef aur tanqeed dono kiya........si i thought k aap b shayd unn hastiyon me shumar han jin pr hm ne nazar ki.......well ab ap bch k kahan jayen gi:)

[SherAli]

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bahut khoob kalam hai. share karne ke liye shukria. kiska hai qit'a? shukria :)

[muneeb143]

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nice work keep sharing

[*Rida*]

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buht khoob.. lakin yeh nazm nahin ashaar hain....moving to Ashaar

[*Hala*]

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ha!! nice work dear... apki imagez achi hoti hai.. kaha sy mila hai yeha khazana :p