~*~*~ Mere Aankhein ~*~*~

[Pink_Princess]

Salam All :salam:

[saraah]

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hmm ek tou avatar me IK HASEEN NIGHAH....phir shair me ZIKR E NIGHAH..ek cute si princess ki sheeshay ki manind chmkti NIGHAH.....WAH.....(i love eyes).....its beautiful..........galiban aapka pehla work hai.........may or may not......pastle work ki look de rha hai.....really artistic touch.....btttttt........cute si princess ki zulf e barham se tapknay wali paani ki boond kuch zyda brri nahee....:mm:

[Pink_Princess]

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hmm ek tou avatar me IK HASEEN NIGHAH....phir shair me ZIKR E NIGHAH..ek cute si princess ki sheeshay ki manind chmkti NIGHAH.....WAH.....(i love eyes).....its beautiful..........galiban aapka pehla work hai.........may or may not......pastle work ki look de rha hai.....really artistic touch.....btttttt........cute si princess ki zulf e barham se tapknay wali paani ki boond kuch zyda brri nahee....:mm:

Thanks Sarah its my First work laiken Inshallah time ke saath saath seekh jaon ge

[saraah]

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Thanks Sarah its my First work laiken Inshallah time ke saath saath seekh jaon ge[/quote]


its 1st work...tou its good n appriciable work yara.....practice makes a man perfect...u made a gud start....keep it up.:rose

[*Rida*]

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warm welcome dear.......
shair buht khobsorat hai......aur deisgning bhi achi karnay ki koshish ki hai...
keep up the good work

[*Hala*]

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welcome dear
nice shair and good effort....keep sharing...

[BUS U HE]

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hmm acha hai:rose

[great_pisces]

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very nice work

[WASI ANJUM]

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Bahot khoobsurt Shair aur design bhi achha kiya hai

[Soulmate]

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nice work

[miss sng]

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Salam All :salam:

wa salam,

apki 1st try bhe achi hay...:thmbup:
nice work dear & keep it up :teddy

[wajid hanif]

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Salam All :salam:

bahut achi try hai first try the,.. bnt pir b kaafi teek hai . aur inshallah aage ja kar aur b acha ho ga bs pic ka size 500 rakha karen..:)
eeaur shair ki kia baat hai '' wa bahut he acha ..shair hai.

[Tanha Hassan]

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very nice

[Ali jee]

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hmm nice