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***Hala*** · 14 May 2008, 23:10

Re: Mat poch mare sabar ki intaha

w.slaam
nice work ji.. per text kuch dim sa ho raha hai

**Gul** · 15 May 2008, 03:59

Re: Mat poch mare sabar ki intaha

Originally posted by Rai View Post

Aslam o alikum

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Buhat achay ...! :) Nice Brother !

***Rida*** · 15 May 2008, 11:07

Re: Mat poch mare sabar ki intaha

wah...kia ahsaar hain:em:

**WASI ANJUM** · 15 May 2008, 15:38

Re: Mat poch mare sabar ki intaha

bahot khoob janab my fav shair
3rd line mein mere khiyal mein imla ki galti hai

**khananiz** · 18 May 2008, 14:50

Re: Mat poch mare sabar ki intaha

buhat khoob..........:thmbup:

**khan khan** · 18 May 2008, 19:58

Re: Mat poch mare sabar ki intaha

Khoob.

**Life is Alone** · 26 June 2008, 22:58

Re: Mat poch mare sabar ki intaha

Originally posted by Rai View Post

Aslam o alikum

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walaikum salam

very niceee Raii:)

**Eshaa Chaudhry** · 26 June 2008, 23:00

Re: Mat poch mare sabar ki intaha

Nice try

per imla ki mistake hay third line mein word unhein ghalat likha hay

**fari** · 27 June 2008, 12:04

Re: Mat poch mare sabar ki intaha

wah bohat acha intakhab:thmbup:

**refreshing_breeze** · 27 June 2008, 12:05

Re: Mat poch mare sabar ki intaha

walaikum assalam

nice work rai :thmbup:

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