Khuda,on Jesa tha (MY OWN)

[Mani16]

Re: Khuda,on Jesa tha (MY OWN)

Main kisi esay insan ko Xplantion kia karoon jisay pta he nhi k Poetry hoti kia bla hy
Or Poetry ki 1 Boht khas Baat ye bhi hy k ye samjhi jati hy samjhayi nhi jati
Afsos k ap jesay log bhi Comments Denay k liye Bethe hote hain
Jinhen pta he nhi k Poetry kis bla ka naam hy
Or meri kismat ye k mujhay aap jesay Bayzok losgon k 7 Poetry share kerni parhti hy:donno:
:tauba

well mujay jo laga bata diya main nay....acha ap ki sens main a gaya hai tu meri sens k liye thora explain ker daien keh kaya lhika hai ap nay

beshaik ap nay shair khud he lhika hai..copy say matlab keh..aisa ik or shair b hai...thoray say words change hain i think or wo shair kuch aisay hai last line yaad hai bus thori si mujay..."Wo Shakhs Muhhabton Main Khuda Jesa Tha"....pora shair ager mujay mila tu main yahan lhikon gi InshaAllah...:rose

[Mani16]

Re: Khuda,on Jesa tha (MY OWN)

Thanks:)

bohat khub

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

Re: Khuda,on Jesa tha (MY OWN)

[center]Main kisi esay insan ko Xplantion kia karoon jisay pta he nhi k Poetry hoti kia bla hy
Or Poetry ki 1 Boht khas Baat ye bhi hy k ye samjhi jati hy samjhayi nhi jati
Afsos k ap jesay log bhi Comments Denay k liye Bethe hote hain
Jinhen pta he nhi k Poetry kis bla ka naam hy
Or meri kismat ye k mujhay aap jesay Bayzok losgon k 7 Poetry share kerni parhti hy:donno:
:tauba

xcuse me..mind ur lang....MashAllah say buhat acha zuak hai Allah k fazal say main khud b poetry lhikti hoon...or un main say kuch pegham per share b ker chuki hoon...



main nay kuch galat nahi kaha ya lhika ap ko jo ap batmeezi per utar ayien hain...main nay aisa shair pehlay perha howa tha so keh diya ap ko....




infect mujay ap say baat he nahi kerni...mujay jo laga main nay keh diya...ap say bardasht nahi howa tu me kaya karon...ainda b jo mujay lagay ga main kahon gi....soo....

[Mani16]

Re: Khuda,on Jesa tha (MY OWN)

Tu main Kabmerr reha hoon k mujh say baat karo,,,
Werna main Mit jayun ga ????
Or rehi baat aapki Poetry likhnay ki tu main aasani se samajh sakta hoon k aapki Poetry kis darjay ki hogi jisko ye shair Out of sens lag reha hy Usnay tu yehi likhna hy na (jana Apni garhi badlo):khi:

xcuse me..mind ur lang....MashAllah say buhat acha zuak hai Allah k fazal say main khud b poetry lhikti hoon...or un main say kuch pegham per share b ker chuki hoon...

main nay kuch galat nahi kaha ya lhika ap ko jo ap batmeezi per utar ayien hain...main nay aisa shair pehlay perha howa tha so keh diya ap ko....




infect mujay ap say baat he nahi kerni...mujay jo laga main nay keh diya...ap say bardasht nahi howa tu me kaya karon...ainda b jo mujay lagay ga main kahon gi....soo....