Khuda,on Jesa tha (MY OWN)

[Mani16]

Assalaam O Alaikum
:)

[*Hala*]

Re: Khuda,on Jesa tha (MY OWN)

hmmm.. not baad... keep it up .. be happy

[khananiz]

Re: Khuda,on Jesa tha (MY OWN)

nice sharing........:thmbup:

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: Khuda,on Jesa tha (MY OWN)

nice

[Mind hackeR]

Re: Khuda,on Jesa tha (MY OWN)

hmm...!!!
theek hi hai...!!!

[Mani16]

Re: Khuda,on Jesa tha (MY OWN)

nice sharing........:thmbup:

nice

hmm...!!!
theek hi hai...!!!

:):)Thanks 2 All:):)
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[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Khuda,on Jesa tha (MY OWN)

bhai samaj nahiai

[Mani16]

Re: Khuda,on Jesa tha (MY OWN)

Bhai Jaan Kia samajh nhi aayi main hoon na
:)

bhai samaj nahiai

[Ali jee]

Re: Khuda,on Jesa tha (MY OWN)

nice work mani dear keep it up .. be happy

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

Re: Khuda,on Jesa tha (MY OWN)

well work acha hai....per me ko shair ik to copy lag raha hai..dosra wo koi sens nahi bana raha...:-s

[Mani16]

Re: Khuda,on Jesa tha (MY OWN)

Janab Sher sense bna reha hy or bilkul bna reha hy
Aap ye kehain k
Mere sense mai nhi aa reha
Or rehi copy ki baat tu aap check karain Sha,id copy ho Main ne tu jo likhna tha likh diya:donno:

well work acha hai....per me ko shair ik to copy lag raha hai..dosra wo koi sens nahi bana raha...:-s

[naveed iqbal]

Re: Khuda,on Jesa tha (MY OWN)

not bad

[Mani16]

Re: Khuda,on Jesa tha (MY OWN)

Thanks Naveed Bhai

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

Re: Khuda,on Jesa tha (MY OWN)

Janab Sher sense bna reha hy or bilkul bna reha hy
Aap ye kehain k
Mere sense mai nhi aa reha
Or rehi copy ki baat tu aap check karain Sha,id copy ho Main ne tu jo likhna tha likh diya:donno:

well mujay jo laga bata diya main nay....acha ap ki sens main a gaya hai tu meri sens k liye thora explain ker daien keh kaya lhika hai ap nay


beshaik ap nay shair khud he lhika hai..copy say matlab keh..aisa ik or shair b hai...thoray say words change hain i think or wo shair kuch aisay hai last line yaad hai bus thori si mujay..."Wo Shakhs Muhhabton Main Khuda Jesa Tha"....pora shair ager mujay mila tu main yahan lhikon gi InshaAllah...:rose

[kemu]

Re: Khuda,on Jesa tha (MY OWN)

bohat khub