zindagi kia he??

[AbgeenA]

:rose

[*Hala*]

Re: zindagi kia he??

kia bat hai sis.. buht achi hai .. be happy

[khananiz]

Re: zindagi kia he??

buhat khoob...........:thmbup:

[Pehli``Barish]

Re: zindagi kia he??

hamzad achi koshish hai .. kafi improvement hai :ff:
kuch baatain point out karongi
aik to frame charon taraf say barbar nahi hai
our shair k lafzon k darmiyan space bhi equal nahi

[Mind hackeR]

Re: zindagi kia he??

hmm...!!!
ghalib chacha ka share design ker diya ap ne ji...!!!
acha design kiya hai...!!!
aur me Pehli Barish se agree kerta hon...!!!
keep on practicing n sharing...!!!
khush rahen... :)

[AbgeenA]

Re: zindagi kia he??

ap sab ka thanx or jin ghaltyon ko point out kia un ka bhi thanx next khyal rakhon gi:)

[Shakh-e-Tamana]

Re: zindagi kia he??

v nice try

[*Hijab*]

Re: zindagi kia he??

mein ne bhi bus Sameera waley he points bataney they:)

you did a great job, choice and work:)

[AbgeenA]

Re: zindagi kia he??

thanx shakh-e-taman n sadia:)

[naveed iqbal]

Re: zindagi kia he??

wah kea bat hay bhai aap ki
bahut acha hay

[AbgeenA]

Re: zindagi kia he??

wah kea bat hay bhai aap ki
bahut acha hay

shukria janab

[Zindgi]

Re: zindagi kia he??

hummm really true

[Wafa]

Re: zindagi kia he??

Bohot khoob hamzad....
kafi improve kea hai ......looking nice.....:rose

[AbgeenA]

Re: zindagi kia he??

hummm really true

thanxx:)

[AbgeenA]

Re: zindagi kia he??

Bohot khoob hamzad....
kafi improve kea hai ......looking nice.....:rose

thanxxx:phool: