Aik shair!

[fari]

Assalam-o-Alikum!

Aik shair design kiya ha ..........

:blush:

[BUS U HE]

Re: Aik shair!

Assalam-o-Alikum!

Aik shair design kiya ha ..........

:blush:

nice bohut zabar dast:clap::clap:lakin aisa dawa karne ki zaroorat he kya hai..koi mara be hai kisi say bichar ker:D

[fari]

Re: Aik shair!

nice bohut zabar dast:clap::clap:lakin aisa dawa karne ki zaroorat he kya hai..koi mara be hai kisi say bichar ker:D

pasnad karnay ka shukriya:khi:

ya tu abb jes nay ya shair likha ha wo hi dawa karnay se parhaz karay :tasali:.........maina tu nahi kiya:mm:

[ummid]

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waalaikumasalam...:blush:

second one maze ka lag raha hai...:D:.
khush raho..

[Capt.Abdur Rehman]

Re: Aik shair!

zabardast jee...!

[sham-e-mehfil]

Re: Aik shair!

wahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

fari
kai bat hai appki ....................superb

[*Rida*]

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Assaam-0-Alaikom:rose
designing buht khobsorat hai....:em:
yeh Shair Shakeel bhi nay bhi desgn kia tha.......
yeh hai
maira dwa bhi tumhari tarahjhoota nikla
main bhi kehta tha keh bichrooN ga tu mar jaaon ga.....

[fari]

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waalaikumasalam...:blush:

second one maze ka lag raha hai...:D:.
khush raho..

:phool:thanko de:wk

zabardast jee...!

:salam:

wahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

fari
kai bat hai appki ....................superb

:khi:yahi bat ha kah aksar shiar ghalt ho jata ha:kr:

Assaam-0-Alaikom:rose
designing buht khobsorat hai....:em:
yeh Shair Shakeel bhi nay bhi desgn kia tha.......
yeh hai
maira dwa bhi tumhari tarahjhoota nikla
main bhi kehta tha keh bichrooN ga tu mar jaaon ga.....

wsalam rida:phool:
woh kiya ha meri sahiri ki vocabulary kuch kamzor ha:khi:ajj kal shair mil nahi rahay :donno:

[shakeeel]

Re: Aik shair!

zabardast ( Daawa" mein jo khara alif hai wo Yey par aaye ga)

[Soulmate]

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wow nice

[Shaheen]

Re: Aik shair!

wsalam
wooow excellent supurb designing Fari nice work
second one is the best .i mean composition .. carry on shweeto

[WASI ANJUM]

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bahoot khoob janab

[fari]

Re: Aik shair!

RIDA tum fari say poocho kay yeh us nay apna signature main yeh chotii si billi kiu rakhi huwi hay ... Kiya koi politician hay ya koi bari hasti ?

Shakal to kuch jani pehchani si lag rahi hay .... Zara check kerna kahin fari nay apni to nahi laga di .... baray arsay baad dekh raha hun na iss liye pooch raha hun ..

BTW shair acha tha. but samajh kuch bhi nahi aya lol

:lpop:app kitni purani rooh hian Pegham ki :tasali:jo ap arsat baad humay dekh rahayhain!!!!


BTW samjhnay kay liya samjh ka hona zaroori ha:tasali:

[sccorpion81]

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Aray wah tum tu kam bhi ker laiti ho...main tu samjha tha k sirf bongiyan marnay k siwa aur kuch aata hi nahien ....

Bhot achi designing hai

[Paki Kuri]

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wsalaa
yaar second wala zayada acha laga raha hai.......................wase yaar sher bhi buhat aacha choose kiya tum ne..................mujhe nahi pata tha tum boongiyoon marne ke ilawa bhi koi kam karte ho.................nice work yaar.......lol