Dil ko

[Raniya Asif]

Re: Dil ko

very very nice rb:phool: keep it up

[sham-e-mehfil]

Re: Dil ko

Nice Image Hai

Butt I Thik K Agar Iss Mian Shair K Mutabiq Udassi Ka Thra Sa Ansar Hotta To Kamal Ho Jata

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: Dil ko

Nice Image Hai

Butt I Thik K Agar Iss Mian Shair K Mutabiq Udassi Ka Thra Sa Ansar Hotta To Kamal Ho Jata

thank u very much sham-e-mehfil for ur comments:rose

aap image ko dobara zara ghor se dekho
girl bilkul akeli hai , happy mood nahi hai uss ka ,apni hi zaaat mein maggan hai, kissi ki yaad mein khoyi hui ,baki surroundings bhi check karo.
agar phir bhi lagta hai ke image poetry ke hissab se proper nahi hai tou next time se zara aur khayal rakh ley ge.

kya samjhi? :mm:

[sham-e-mehfil]

Re: Dil ko

Sorry K App Ko Meri Bat Se Takleef Hoi
Likin Pata Nahi Kyun Muje Lagtta Hai K Agar Ye Girl Fari Ki Bajayee Ko Haqqeat Main Larki Hooti To Behtar Hotta

Likin App Ziyada Ajantti Hai

App Nay Jesa Banaya Bohat Khoob Banaya

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: Dil ko

Sorry K App Ko Meri Bat Se Takleef Hoi
Likin Pata Nahi Kyun Muje Lagtta Hai K Agar Ye Girl Fari Ki Bajayee Ko Haqqeat Main Larki Hooti To Behtar Hotta

Likin App Ziyada Ajantti Hai

App Nay Jesa Banaya Bohat Khoob Banaya

na jaani sorry ki zaroorat nahi hai
comment issi liye hota hai ke ussey maloom ho sakey ke jo kaam hum ney kiya hai woh kaisa hai
so ye aap ka right hai ke kaam ko dekh kar ussey judge karo
aise hi tou hum apna kaam improve kar saktey hai.
aap ko jaise laga aap ney likh diya
aur iss ke liye hum teh-e-dil se aap ke mashkur hai. :rose
kya samjhi jaani? :mm:

meri next sharings mein bhi bejhijhak comment karna hai aap ney
kuch nahi kehte aur bura bhi nahi maantey. :na:
ok :thmbup:

[Muhammad Khalil]

Re: Dil ko

hummmmmmmmmmm larai...........khair koi baat nahi dono lahore kee hee hian
sanoo kee:mm:

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Re: Dil ko

hummmmmmmmmmm larai...........khair koi baat nahi dono lahore kee hee hian
sanoo kee:mm:

koi larai nahi jee
hum bohat aman pasand member aur insaan hai
kya samjhe? :mm:

[miss sng]

Re: Dil ko

meray pass kisi cheez ki kami to nhi
bus teray bagaar zindgee udass rehti hay

sahii kaha....:lpop:
bohat khoob shair :)
aur app ka kam bhe acha hay...:thmbup:

[*Hijab*]

Re: Dil ko

cute:)
bohat ache..aap to bohat acha kam kar rahi hien saba ji:)
plz keep up the great work
and khush rahiye
muskrate rehiye:)

[refreshing_breeze]

Re: Dil ko

thank u very much miss sng & desiprincess :rose